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fame is a walk of fame3 total reviews
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your philosophical writing has a unique and thought-provoking quality. The repetition and juxtaposition of "rich" and "poor," as well as "conversation" and "controversy," create an intriguing exploration of these concepts. The absence of capitalization adds an interesting layer to the piece, making it feel both timeless and modern.
Your use of middle ages and renaissance words, such as "gracious" and "extravaganza," adds a distinctive flavor to your writing. This poem challenges the reader to consider the deeper meanings and connections between wealth, fame, and the quality of conversations.
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Your philosophical writing has a unique and thought-provoking quality. The repetition and juxtaposition of "rich" and "poor," as well as "conversation" and "controversy," create an intriguing exploration of these concepts. The absence of capitalization adds an interesting layer to the piece, making it feel both timeless and modern.
Your use of middle ages and renaissance words, such as "gracious" and "extravaganza," adds a distinctive flavor to your writing. This poem challenges the reader to consider the deeper meanings and connections between wealth, fame, and the quality of conversations.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
Comment from Rick Gardner
Took me a long time to understand this poem, very deep progression of thoughts. Have to be honest this is above my brains ability to truly comprehend the underlying message. Still enjoyed reading this many times over.
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Took me a long time to understand this poem, very deep progression of thoughts. Have to be honest this is above my brains ability to truly comprehend the underlying message. Still enjoyed reading this many times over.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has a wonderful rhythm to it. It's almost like a chant. The back and forth between fame, conversation, and richness keeps it interesting. Keep up the great work - this poem definitely made me think!
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Your poem has a wonderful rhythm to it. It's almost like a chant. The back and forth between fame, conversation, and richness keeps it interesting. Keep up the great work - this poem definitely made me think!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024