BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Quality Time"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
8 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
****** I have not got a six star left. It's a shame this is a perfect thing. The picture and matting and poem blend together gloriously. They all just belong! Karen
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****** I have not got a six star left. It's a shame this is a perfect thing. The picture and matting and poem blend together gloriously. They all just belong! Karen
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an endearing post June and I enjoyed your warm words of love here as parents and children in all creatures is caring and protective, love Dolly x x x
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This is an endearing post June and I enjoyed your warm words of love here as parents and children in all creatures is caring and protective, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from lyenochka
I like your "Circle of Love" and what I have seen of those documentaries those penguin parents, they sure are devoted and know how to provide quality time for their kids!
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I like your "Circle of Love" and what I have seen of those documentaries those penguin parents, they sure are devoted and know how to provide quality time for their kids!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from kahpot
Love the last line, your words capture this artwork wonderfully, where parents and children are concerned it is a circle of love through the generations, very well written and presented****kahpot
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Love the last line, your words capture this artwork wonderfully, where parents and children are concerned it is a circle of love through the generations, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent chapter for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right renga composition. Beautiful presentation, I like penguins. Good syllables and connection between lines. Thank you for participating in our book with such a beautiful verse.
gypsy
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Excellent chapter for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right renga composition. Beautiful presentation, I like penguins. Good syllables and connection between lines. Thank you for participating in our book with such a beautiful verse.
gypsy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from karenina
"Antarctic circle" of love is very clever! It's been a joy to follow this book of Renga poems --
As it is meant to be a collaborative form this book of Renga Poems is a great way to interact with fellow poets and see how things flow!
Your image of penguins is endearing and adds to the enjoyment of your 7/7 lines.
Happy Holidays!
Karenina
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"Antarctic circle" of love is very clever! It's been a joy to follow this book of Renga poems --
As it is meant to be a collaborative form this book of Renga Poems is a great way to interact with fellow poets and see how things flow!
Your image of penguins is endearing and adds to the enjoyment of your 7/7 lines.
Happy Holidays!
Karenina
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Really like the imagery portrayed in your artwork for this Renga couplet.
I will assume that depicted is a (large) male penguin in your illustration. However, to keep it neutral, consider "parent and child." Antarctica (sic) reflects the reality. If it was not for your existing syllable count, I would edit to: together in circle of love.
Mark
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June,
Really like the imagery portrayed in your artwork for this Renga couplet.
I will assume that depicted is a (large) male penguin in your illustration. However, to keep it neutral, consider "parent and child." Antarctica (sic) reflects the reality. If it was not for your existing syllable count, I would edit to: together in circle of love.
Mark
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
I hunk it's lovely, I think dad tends to look after the littlies while mum goes off hunting for food while the others wait to be fed, isn't that a wonderful thing? Well done June, well done, blessings Roy
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I hunk it's lovely, I think dad tends to look after the littlies while mum goes off hunting for food while the others wait to be fed, isn't that a wonderful thing? Well done June, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024