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Snapshots of Life

treasures found in an old photo album

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Blue marble
This is a nicely told story. That song asks a good question. We all like looking at photos of the past. Memories shows how old we are even if we wish to deny it.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know I just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com ( search Joan Pechter The Interloper) or click the link and the end of my profile bio.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the sweet review. I will check out amazon regarding your book and probably buy it.
reply by dragonpoet on 12-Jan-2025
    My pleasure, Sharon. Thanks for the interest in my book.
Comment from RodG
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** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with the criteria outlined on the Q&A page.**
Your life seems to have been an interesting one, but give us more DETAILS.
1. What song are you referring to in paragraph 1? Give its title.
2. In paragraph 2 cite at least one KIND of memory that is a favorite now. For example, dates I had.
3. In paragraph 3 explain why any of the three examples cited is special.
4. In paragraph 4 tell us where you moved after leaving Minnesota.
5. Your summary of your life now is good in paragraph 5.
6. Combine paragraphs 5 & 6.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read my story and leave your helpful feedback.
    What song am I referring to -
    "When did I get old? Derrick Dove & the Peacekeepers ask that in their song" Perhaps I wasn't clear enough in my reference to the song and hope that the change I made to my story helps. As for your other questions, I think they are answered in the story I wrote and the examples I gave of the sort of memories I find in my old photo album.
Comment from royowen
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My wife and I have done a lot of travelling over the years and it brings much joy to peruse the old memories of raising children, taking care and relating to beautiful grandchildren such joy from doing that, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
    Thank you.
reply by royowen on 03-Dec-2024
    Welcome