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Hibernation

how long to Spring, brrr?

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet, you may not have noticed.

I read your poem last night and you had a beautiful pic of a tiny furry mouse in a hollowed trunk(?) showcasing your poem.

Something happened.. and the original pic was been swapped with his sensual pic ..nice but it has nothing to do with the topic of your poem.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
    Thanks. Damn!
reply by tempeste on 04-Dec-2024
    Ciao mystery poet, you now have your first vote.

    Shame you didn't find the original
    artwork nevertheless I like the topic.

    Field mice have a tough life in winter if they don't find shelter and safety inside a home or a barn.

    If they have to make a burrow outside, they risk being food for many predators out in the wild. Or die of hunger as you pointed out.

    You still have 16 hours before this contest ends.

    Best of luck!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
    Ciao, Tempeste. And thank you. I will try and find the original artwork, which I also preferred.
reply by tempeste on 04-Dec-2024
    🐭 very sweet 🥹
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
    👍
reply by tempeste on 05-Dec-2024
    Yeah!

    I'm glad you won the blue ribbon!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
    Thanks to you!
reply by tempeste on 05-Dec-2024
    That's very sweet of you. (smiles)

    Great teamwork. (wink)

    Keep safe ! (four leaf clover)
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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What a beautiful winter Haiku poem you've created. There is something about a cold winter night and snuggling that go together. I will have to look it up.

Well done and good luck in ghd contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
    Thanks, Cecilia.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 04-Dec-2024
    You're welcome

    Cecilia
Comment from Bill Schott
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This haiku, Hibernation, has the proper formatting and sees the woodland vermin busy trying still to establish a winter's provision to fend off the feared state of starvation.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
    Thanks, Bill.