A Midnight Walk on Christmas Eve
A little bit of happiness.13 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a great Christmas poem loved this lines
Down Main Street, we come, and I'm leading the way. To the town's Christmas Tree, we dance and play. Once around the tree, the happy creatures sing with glee. Back home again, I glance down the street at my friends, never wanting this night to end.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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a great Christmas poem loved this lines
Down Main Street, we come, and I'm leading the way. To the town's Christmas Tree, we dance and play. Once around the tree, the happy creatures sing with glee. Back home again, I glance down the street at my friends, never wanting this night to end.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hi, Jake. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderful post for Christmas Mike and I hope the forthcoming celebration is enjoyed and savoured. Your words are uplifting and positive, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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A wonderful post for Christmas Mike and I hope the forthcoming celebration is enjoyed and savoured. Your words are uplifting and positive, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hi, Dolly. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Father Flaps
This is a really cute entry for the Christmas Poetry contest, Mike. I wish you "Good Luck!" with it. It's like a dream you're having on Christmas Eve, complete with Santa's sleigh and reindeer, and even an elf. Yet you can hear excited horses nearby. You can even hear a train whistle!
Suddenly, there's a growling Grinch, Cindy Lou Who, and Winnie the Pooh! Is it a Christmas miracle or just a fantastic dream?
Christmas Eve is full of magic. I had my own experience when I was 11 or 12 years old, back around 1962. I heard the whole thing on our rooftop... the reindeer hooves, sleigh runners, and bells! Ten minutes later, they took off the other end of the roof. It was all so real. I swear it happened. And I've relived the event for the past 62 years!
Nicely penned, Mike!
Merry Christmas, buddy!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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This is a really cute entry for the Christmas Poetry contest, Mike. I wish you "Good Luck!" with it. It's like a dream you're having on Christmas Eve, complete with Santa's sleigh and reindeer, and even an elf. Yet you can hear excited horses nearby. You can even hear a train whistle!
Suddenly, there's a growling Grinch, Cindy Lou Who, and Winnie the Pooh! Is it a Christmas miracle or just a fantastic dream?
Christmas Eve is full of magic. I had my own experience when I was 11 or 12 years old, back around 1962. I heard the whole thing on our rooftop... the reindeer hooves, sleigh runners, and bells! Ten minutes later, they took off the other end of the roof. It was all so real. I swear it happened. And I've relived the event for the past 62 years!
Nicely penned, Mike!
Merry Christmas, buddy!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hi, Kimbob. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from GWHARGIS
This would be a great children's Christmas story. All the characters coming to life on this holy night. Nothing is impossible. I really enjoyed this imaginative Christmas poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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This would be a great children's Christmas story. All the characters coming to life on this holy night. Nothing is impossible. I really enjoyed this imaginative Christmas poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hi, Gretchen. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A joy to read as ever, Papamike! I can tell you enjoyed writing this, your imagination having free rein as you incorporate your fun-filled and magical Christmas Eve into delightfully rhymed and fluent verse. All complemented with an eye-catching visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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A joy to read as ever, Papamike! I can tell you enjoyed writing this, your imagination having free rein as you incorporate your fun-filled and magical Christmas Eve into delightfully rhymed and fluent verse. All complemented with an eye-catching visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hi, Debbie. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and rhymed on for the Christmas poetry contest. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Have a very blessed day and may God give you a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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This is very well written and rhymed on for the Christmas poetry contest. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Have a very blessed day and may God give you a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hi, Patrica. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
I think it's a great whimsical piece that captures the sense of magic you get on Christmas. Great scene setting with the snow crunching underfoot, and the illuminated Christmas characters coming to life around you. I think it's a great tale for kids. estory
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I think it's a great whimsical piece that captures the sense of magic you get on Christmas. Great scene setting with the snow crunching underfoot, and the illuminated Christmas characters coming to life around you. I think it's a great tale for kids. estory
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Begin Again
Magical and full of hopes and dreams of yesteryears when our childhood blossomed with love, faith, and imagination. Now as we age, our memories and stories fill in the gaps. Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Magical and full of hopes and dreams of yesteryears when our childhood blossomed with love, faith, and imagination. Now as we age, our memories and stories fill in the gaps. Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hi, Carol. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I enjoyed your walk, Papamike, as you danced with delight around the Christmas decorations bringing cheer and blessings with even the Grinch getting a look in. Nicely fdone and I loved that final line of dancing with delight. Well done,
cheers
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed your walk, Papamike, as you danced with delight around the Christmas decorations bringing cheer and blessings with even the Grinch getting a look in. Nicely fdone and I loved that final line of dancing with delight. Well done,
cheers
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Hi, Pearl. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Avery Daniel
This had a really happy, upbeat vibe to the poem. It was a good, jolly poem to get us into the Christmas spirit, in which I'm very happy that you referenced the savior's birth. Overall, a very good read. I especially enjoyed the lighthearted nature within your word selection.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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This had a really happy, upbeat vibe to the poem. It was a good, jolly poem to get us into the Christmas spirit, in which I'm very happy that you referenced the savior's birth. Overall, a very good read. I especially enjoyed the lighthearted nature within your word selection.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Hi, A very. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike