BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Waiting for My Winter"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
14 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Santha
This is a nice poem about the coming of Winter and the beauty that proceeds the snow.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend and Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S The Interloper. If I didn't tell you before, I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or you can just go to Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Hi Santha
This is a nice poem about the coming of Winter and the beauty that proceeds the snow.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend and Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S The Interloper. If I didn't tell you before, I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or you can just go to Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The Interloper.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much ..I will check your profile page..
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You are most kindly welcome, Santha.
Thanks for checking out my book. If you choose to buy, let me know how you liked it.
Joan
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
A lot of us are already in winter mode. We are having cold rain. And it does not rain this time of year normally. It it pitch ard at 6 pm instead of 9 or 10. Creepy. Nice poem. Karen
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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A lot of us are already in winter mode. We are having cold rain. And it does not rain this time of year normally. It it pitch ard at 6 pm instead of 9 or 10. Creepy. Nice poem. Karen
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you Karen for stopping by
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:-)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Excellent! That picture with your words beneath it, are perfect together. The Autumn sky does look lovely when the fading sunlight is disappearing, and it seems to be making way for the chill of snow. I enjoyed this one, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Excellent! That picture with your words beneath it, are perfect together. The Autumn sky does look lovely when the fading sunlight is disappearing, and it seems to be making way for the chill of snow. I enjoyed this one, my friend. Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you for stopping by .I am happy it resonated with you
Comment from jaded831
You captured the feel of an autumn evening. The thing I like most about the cooler weather, holidays bring family and friends together. Your poem gave me that feeling of cuddling around a fire. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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You captured the feel of an autumn evening. The thing I like most about the cooler weather, holidays bring family and friends together. Your poem gave me that feeling of cuddling around a fire. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much ,my friend.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-A good follow up to the previous poem.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Very good color imagery in line two.
-A very good concluding line with
the "snowy shroud."
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-A good follow up to the previous poem.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Very good color imagery in line two.
-A very good concluding line with
the "snowy shroud."
-Very well done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by..
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent chapter for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right renga composition. Beautiful presentation. Good syllables and connection between lines. Thank you for participating in our book with such a beautiful verse.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Excellent chapter for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right renga composition. Beautiful presentation. Good syllables and connection between lines. Thank you for participating in our book with such a beautiful verse.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for the encouragement..
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This lovely post is vibrant with colour and expectation as the transition between the seasons take place and autumn moves into winter. Well done on this feast for the senses, Sanku! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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This lovely post is vibrant with colour and expectation as the transition between the seasons take place and autumn moves into winter. Well done on this feast for the senses, Sanku! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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thank you very much for stopping by
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this wonderful renga poem and the beautiful artwork with us. You did a great job describing the artwork. I had fun reading. This is a good write.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful renga poem and the beautiful artwork with us. You did a great job describing the artwork. I had fun reading. This is a good write.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Anticipating the winter is something I hate doing as I would much rather anticipate the Spring! Your words are ambient and colourful, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Anticipating the winter is something I hate doing as I would much rather anticipate the Spring! Your words are ambient and colourful, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much .Whatever may be our feeling the cycles will be repeated...
Comment from Sally Law
It will most assuredly come, dear Sanku. A lovely poem you have here for the transition from autumn to winter. Thank you for sharing and beautifully so.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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It will most assuredly come, dear Sanku. A lovely poem you have here for the transition from autumn to winter. Thank you for sharing and beautifully so.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sally :))
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much