The Trees Are Growing
This is my poem I wrote from my heart that I want to share10 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem tends to show your admiration of nature, and you have expressed clearly with great sentiment. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. Remain blessed.
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Your poem tends to show your admiration of nature, and you have expressed clearly with great sentiment. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. Remain blessed.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from royowen
There are so many things to be grateful for, I'm so glad that I have met the creator of the universe, He made all these things, this is so beautifully written my friend, well done, great job, blessings Roy
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There are so many things to be grateful for, I'm so glad that I have met the creator of the universe, He made all these things, this is so beautifully written my friend, well done, great job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
I am never too sure how to judge short works such as yours. I certainly know it is heartfelt and that you obviously love nature. Keep writing from your heart as it will always provide the soul for your work. All the best.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
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I am never too sure how to judge short works such as yours. I certainly know it is heartfelt and that you obviously love nature. Keep writing from your heart as it will always provide the soul for your work. All the best.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from harmony13
An excellent poem about how things grow in nature. I like how the
author also includes "Like babies growing up to become adults". Life
for me is amazing! The poem flows and connects well. I also liked the
background color used! Great Poem!
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An excellent poem about how things grow in nature. I like how the
author also includes "Like babies growing up to become adults". Life
for me is amazing! The poem flows and connects well. I also liked the
background color used! Great Poem!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
Growth encompassed in so many things, with the trees, living so much longer than all the rest as if, overseeing their lives. Shading them, nurturing them and casting their dappled shadows.
Tim
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Growth encompassed in so many things, with the trees, living so much longer than all the rest as if, overseeing their lives. Shading them, nurturing them and casting their dappled shadows.
Tim
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your love of trees in this poem and I just have one suggestion for you here:
(Lastly, the leaves (will) sprout colors in the fall time)
Love Dolly x x x
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I enjoyed your love of trees in this poem and I just have one suggestion for you here:
(Lastly, the leaves (will) sprout colors in the fall time)
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Kahlani
What a valiant effort at writing a poem about fall. My favourite line is The trees are growing like babies. This shows the relationship between nature and humans. Thank you for sharing.
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What a valiant effort at writing a poem about fall. My favourite line is The trees are growing like babies. This shows the relationship between nature and humans. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from June Sargent
You've painted with your words a beautiful painting of life and all that grows and blossoms. That includes humans as well as plants. They all sprout from tiny seeds and bloom into fruits of joy and beauty.
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You've painted with your words a beautiful painting of life and all that grows and blossoms. That includes humans as well as plants. They all sprout from tiny seeds and bloom into fruits of joy and beauty.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from lancellot
This is nice and it is always good to write about things that have a personal connection to you.
notes:
Like plants growing fresh strawberries {and peaches}
- I would leave the peaches off, as they grow on trees
Lastly, the leaves are sprout colors in the falltime
_ Suggest rewriting this line, and falltime is not a word.
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This is nice and it is always good to write about things that have a personal connection to you.
notes:
Like plants growing fresh strawberries {and peaches}
- I would leave the peaches off, as they grow on trees
Lastly, the leaves are sprout colors in the falltime
_ Suggest rewriting this line, and falltime is not a word.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Your poems tells a lovely story of all the things around us that constantly grow and change. As they say...the only constant thing in life is change. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing.
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Your poems tells a lovely story of all the things around us that constantly grow and change. As they say...the only constant thing in life is change. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024