Schoolyard Belles
Pretty in pigtails3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi John
This lune tells of first love and how boy show it sometimes with little acts of violence, like pushing or pulling pigtails. Also, few reminds us that first loves are never forgotten.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
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Hi John
This lune tells of first love and how boy show it sometimes with little acts of violence, like pushing or pulling pigtails. Also, few reminds us that first loves are never forgotten.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
Comment from Rick Gardner
Good and bad memories, many are forgotten, many will never be forgot. They live in you, sometimes grow in you. Brothers, sisters to listen to, to be told you are a stupid idiot. I forgot what they really said.
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Good and bad memories, many are forgotten, many will never be forgot. They live in you, sometimes grow in you. Brothers, sisters to listen to, to be told you are a stupid idiot. I forgot what they really said.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written LUNE Poemand I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a lovely evening and may you have a terrific week. Patricia.
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This is a very nicely written LUNE Poemand I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a lovely evening and may you have a terrific week. Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024