BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Sudden Snowfall "Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
That's like deep winter here in the South!! ;) ;) A great addition to your collection here, Lady June -- Thanx so much for sharing that perspective! ;) :) Yvette
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That's like deep winter here in the South!! ;) ;) A great addition to your collection here, Lady June -- Thanx so much for sharing that perspective! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a stunning visual, June! I can feel that chill in the air as the golden leaves face their untimely demise. Lovely alliteration enhances the flow of this evocative verse. Well done! Debbie
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What a stunning visual, June! I can feel that chill in the air as the golden leaves face their untimely demise. Lovely alliteration enhances the flow of this evocative verse. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent 7-7 stanza with vivid imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I love the presentation. Thank you for participating.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Excellent 7-7 stanza with vivid imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I love the presentation. Thank you for participating.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Reading this poem sets the beautiful scene of why there are coats worn as first comes the leaves and rembering in the fall of seasons we all can visualize Alaska.
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Reading this poem sets the beautiful scene of why there are coats worn as first comes the leaves and rembering in the fall of seasons we all can visualize Alaska.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024