Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

What a wonderful story in a verse Katie! This flowed off the tongue beautifully with delightful rhythm and rhyme and, of course, a strong message of staying off the snack-le-y-doo. I think this might well be an American spelling but the British would be 'advi(c)e.' The very best of luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much Debbie. I'll check into that word you mentioned. Thanks for your lovely comments.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a delightful story in a poem and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It rhymes very nicely and it flows very well when it is red and loud. By the way on 25 January coming up, I will have maintain my 104 pound weight loss for five years, which is a big achievement for me. Not only have I lost all that weight. I also am a very avid walker and this year when I complete the year. I will have walked 1000 miles this year and in six years I have walked over 7000 miles. Patricia.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024

Thanks for reviewing and congratulations Patricia! So glad you're maintaining a healthy weight for yourself. Walking is such a great form of exercise. I always did swim aerobics because I have bad knees.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing and keep up the good work.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I was so bad about eating chocolate that after fasting my blood sugar was 109. I had eaten chocolate chip cookies with abandon. Your poem was funny but still cautionary. Moderation and balance. Keys to a happy life. Gretchen

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024

Thanks so very much Gretchen! Moderation and balance are the keys to a happy life
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977