clearly a bunny
aging and youth contained3 total reviews
Comment from Darlene BoClair
From a young bunny to an older rabbit youthful and vibrant as the years go by. I love how you express your memories with words. I love reading expressions of amazing memories.
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From a young bunny to an older rabbit youthful and vibrant as the years go by. I love how you express your memories with words. I love reading expressions of amazing memories.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has such a playful tone! I really love the twist with the bunny claiming it's not a rabbit - that's so funny. The lines about the "right light" and how they "don't even exist" give off a feeling of carefree energy. Your poem is fun and full of personality and I couldn't help but smile while reading it! Great work!
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Your poem has such a playful tone! I really love the twist with the bunny claiming it's not a rabbit - that's so funny. The lines about the "right light" and how they "don't even exist" give off a feeling of carefree energy. Your poem is fun and full of personality and I couldn't help but smile while reading it! Great work!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Nicki.B
Haha Margo I really enjoyed this, very witty. I think. Many of us see the bunny lines I for one tend to pretend they don't exist lol! But that's not what important right, you're only as young as you feel! Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
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Haha Margo I really enjoyed this, very witty. I think. Many of us see the bunny lines I for one tend to pretend they don't exist lol! But that's not what important right, you're only as young as you feel! Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
