The funniest Joke
dark humor meaningless ness of life the great paradox...2 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
Oh, I think God laughs at me all of the time. I'm usually highly entertaining on most days. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Oh, I think God laughs at me all of the time. I'm usually highly entertaining on most days. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is full of raw emotion. I really felt the internal conflict you shared. The word choices like the "ghost of your father speaks to you from the stars" - really pulled me in. I also loved how you captured the irony of life. Especially in the final lines with "funny sense of fucking humor." Great way to end your poem! Great work!
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Your poem is full of raw emotion. I really felt the internal conflict you shared. The word choices like the "ghost of your father speaks to you from the stars" - really pulled me in. I also loved how you captured the irony of life. Especially in the final lines with "funny sense of fucking humor." Great way to end your poem! Great work!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
