Who's There
How cruel the mind can be2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really felt the tension in your poem. You've captured that feeling of being on edge - not knowing what's out there - so well. I liked how you took me through that panic! It kept me on the edge of my seat! The twist at the end was brilliant. Great work!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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I really felt the tension in your poem. You've captured that feeling of being on edge - not knowing what's out there - so well. I liked how you took me through that panic! It kept me on the edge of my seat! The twist at the end was brilliant. Great work!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thank You so much for your feedback. Trying to capture what the minds capable of in words that let's the reader fully understand and feeling things helps to understand it. So glad it came out that way
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Who's There, speaks to that lost sense we may get when the dreams become more a part of a pseudo reality than just passing thoughts through an uncoiling mind. Keeping the surreal out of the real is sometimes a challenge.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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This poem, Who's There, speaks to that lost sense we may get when the dreams become more a part of a pseudo reality than just passing thoughts through an uncoiling mind. Keeping the surreal out of the real is sometimes a challenge.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much for your feedback. The mind is a complicated thing and so much to understand
