Charlie Plays the Ukulele
Charlie never gives up on a dream2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem! The way you captured Charlie's hopeful nature was so perfect. I loved the part where he wonders if he played his medley "wrong" - it added a lot of heart to your piece. The mix of humor and a little sadness made it feel real. I could easily picture the scene. It was a delightful, easy read, and I could feel the charm in every line. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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I really enjoyed your poem! The way you captured Charlie's hopeful nature was so perfect. I loved the part where he wonders if he played his medley "wrong" - it added a lot of heart to your piece. The mix of humor and a little sadness made it feel real. I could easily picture the scene. It was a delightful, easy read, and I could feel the charm in every line. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Charlie is the Forest Gump of his environment. Like Forest, though, he perseveres and finds success where we wouldn't look. Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from ESOSTINE
What a pity. I truly sympathise with Charlie, who spent his best to attract his heart's desire, but ended up losing his best and his desire. Thanks so much for sharing your story in a poem. Well delivered.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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What a pity. I truly sympathise with Charlie, who spent his best to attract his heart's desire, but ended up losing his best and his desire. Thanks so much for sharing your story in a poem. Well delivered.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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And I thank YOU for the nice take on Charlie. He is a little like Forest Gump and finds success in places where we wouldn't look.