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Trust Him in all He asks.

20 syllable poem

17 total reviews 
Comment from fm wright
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A beautiful poem with a wonderful message. I like the words that you chose and you managed to say so much in so few of syllables. You have chosen a very lovely image to go with the poem.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work leaving a nice review and for the six stars
reply by fm wright on 04-Dec-2024
    Wonderful message.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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He does know what's best for us. He knows the outcome of all the things that fill us with anxiety. This was a great reminder of that. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Patricia,
These for lines is just what the Bible tries to get us to believe. If and when we do, our lives can never be better.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas.
Joan

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you for making time to read and review my work
reply by dragonpoet on 02-Dec-2024
    No problem, Patricia.
    Joan
Comment from karenina
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Agreed! Pretty sure as this stands you have nineteen syllables though...

That's an easy edit!

I love your vibrant blue background and the wreath with a Christmas tree in the center.

Faith is a verb! The Lord asks? We must surely trust and take action!

Karenina

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this thank
reply by karenina on 02-Dec-2024
    You're welcome!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-I love the artwork.
-A very nice presentation.
-You wrote a good poem to go with it.
-A positive message about
trusting in the Lord and "walking in faith."
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Your reviews are always special to me. Thank you so much.
reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Dec-2024
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Patricia,

This is a great four line poem. This poem shines bright with your love for God. The lines are simple, but hold a very powerful message.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and nice review.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 02-Dec-2024
    Patricia,

    You're welcome

    Cecilia
Comment from Teri7
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Patricia, This is a very beautiful and very well written 20 syllable poem you have penned about trusting in what the Lord ask us to do and doing it. Great imagery also. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    With gratitude of my heart, I wish to thank you for a very nice review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I completely trust Jesus as I was raised Father Son Holy Spirit. I have learned to not worry because He truly loves every one of us. Thisis a beautiful poem that many people will enjoy. Thank you for sharing it.

:) Alexandra

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Your words of encouragement are always appreciated thank
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 02-Dec-2024
    Your welcome :)
Comment from LJbutterfly
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The Lord is with us always. All we have to do is trust Him and obey His will. Your inspirational poem encourages us to walk in faith and our Lord will guide us as we follow Him. Your poem is uplifting and reassuring.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    I am always grateful when I get encouraging words like this. Thank you you
Comment from Darlene BoClair
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I believe you are a perfect person of faith. Faith personally always you to gracefully write of your daily obedience in the earth we all humbly walk in.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much for stopping by reading and reviewing my work I appreciate