Reviews from
nope
2 total reviews
Comment from
Lana Marie
This is funny . You did a great job with the whole visual, including the colors and fonts you used. When a child is hungry, they can definitely devour things quickly. Good entry for this contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
Thank you very much Lana, and glad you enjoyed this fun little piece.
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Comment from
dragonpoet
Hi
To eat fruit is a good longing for your nephew to have. But I highly doubt that this is the desire this poem is alluding to.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a nice holiday season.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
Thanks Joan! Yes a little ambiguity keeps the wit sharp ; )
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reply by dragonpoet on 12-Dec-2024
No problem, Simian.
You are so right.
Joan
reply by dragonpoet on 12-Dec-2024
No problem, Simian.
You are so right.
Joan
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