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Comment from Lana Marie
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This is funny . You did a great job with the whole visual, including the colors and fonts you used. When a child is hungry, they can definitely devour things quickly. Good entry for this contest.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much Lana, and glad you enjoyed this fun little piece.
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Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi
To eat fruit is a good longing for your nephew to have. But I highly doubt that this is the desire this poem is alluding to.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a nice holiday season.
Joan

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
    Thanks Joan! Yes a little ambiguity keeps the wit sharp ; )
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reply by dragonpoet on 12-Dec-2024
    No problem, Simian.
    You are so right.
    Joan
reply by dragonpoet on 12-Dec-2024
    No problem, Simian.
    You are so right.
    Joan