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In the dark, the screams never stop.
3 total reviews
Comment from
Begin Again
Like I said before...You have a way of building that suspense and holding it over the reader from start to finish...very well done. I knew it wasn't going to be over with that clock still ticking.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
Comment from
Barry Penfold
An exciting tale with so much more to come. I like your writing style. Keeping the reader on edge and eagerly waiting for the next message from the phone. I suspect there is much more to come. Well done.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
Comment from
Rick Gardner
Still not a sleep yet, send more, don't want to sleep until this is over. Run away, who is on the phone or am I missing something already, the box gets heavier and heavier.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
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