2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 113 "Nightly Walks".
14 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
I love the fantastic color play. The black background with that rich captivating red jumps off the page.
Lost love does feel like it will go on forever. Most enjoyable, my friend!
Douglas
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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I love the fantastic color play. The black background with that rich captivating red jumps off the page.
Lost love does feel like it will go on forever. Most enjoyable, my friend!
Douglas
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 Douglas. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Greif is such a lonely emotion, especially when in the situation of doing these little things and having to do them alone, an excellent free verse, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Greif is such a lonely emotion, especially when in the situation of doing these little things and having to do them alone, an excellent free verse, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....quite an emotional reality. In a strange way, we all want to feel this way, because it means we had true love. It may be a sad ending, but many never experience a love so deep
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....quite an emotional reality. In a strange way, we all want to feel this way, because it means we had true love. It may be a sad ending, but many never experience a love so deep
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, and although there seems to be a lot more widows than widowers, it doesn't quell the sorrow, my wife is holidaying with our daughter, while I look after our dog, and I miss her terribly, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Oh yes, and although there seems to be a lot more widows than widowers, it doesn't quell the sorrow, my wife is holidaying with our daughter, while I look after our dog, and I miss her terribly, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
aww a sad man in a sad poem
great imagery with deep feeling
smooth flow - no spag or typo
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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aww a sad man in a sad poem
great imagery with deep feeling
smooth flow - no spag or typo
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The pain I felt as I read this poem is unreal. I wish I had a six left, but I do not. I got goosebumps reading and tears. You did a wonderful job with this poem.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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The pain I felt as I read this poem is unreal. I wish I had a six left, but I do not. I got goosebumps reading and tears. You did a wonderful job with this poem.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
This is nicely worded, and it was a good one to listen to however, I could not read it because of the red font on the black it just does not appear to me. May you have a lovely day and may you have God's blessing on your life. Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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This is nicely worded, and it was a good one to listen to however, I could not read it because of the red font on the black it just does not appear to me. May you have a lovely day and may you have God's blessing on your life. Patricia.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was so sad. I envisioned a person who lost someone very dear to them. Life holds no meaning for them anymore. You captured the melancholy feeling of loss. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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This was so sad. I envisioned a person who lost someone very dear to them. Life holds no meaning for them anymore. You captured the melancholy feeling of loss. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
So sad, I know that puppy fi elds are associated death, especially those lives lost at wartime. This kind if sorrow is quite relatable as nany have us have lost a love one to war, or know someone who has.
RJ
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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So sad, I know that puppy fi elds are associated death, especially those lives lost at wartime. This kind if sorrow is quite relatable as nany have us have lost a love one to war, or know someone who has.
RJ
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautiful portrayal of grief, both in visual and poetry. As ever, Gypsy, every word is assiduously selected for palpable impact. Thanks for sharing. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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A beautiful portrayal of grief, both in visual and poetry. As ever, Gypsy, every word is assiduously selected for palpable impact. Thanks for sharing. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy