2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from kahpot
That would be quite disturbing not only for the people but also the peacefulness and so many feet to play footsie with, what a great choice of critter for this haiku, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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That would be quite disturbing not only for the people but also the peacefulness and so many feet to play footsie with, what a great choice of critter for this haiku, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Now that wouldn't be a very salubrious experience, they can make one very sick indeed, if the manage to nip you, at lease the Aussie ones, this is a great example of an haiku, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings
Roy
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Now that wouldn't be a very salubrious experience, they can make one very sick indeed, if the manage to nip you, at lease the Aussie ones, this is a great example of an haiku, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings
Roy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Not at all good having centipedes at a picnic. Of course, I'm not fond of any insects or things that resembles insects. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed both, but the centipedes.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Not at all good having centipedes at a picnic. Of course, I'm not fond of any insects or things that resembles insects. Thank you for sharing this poem and presentation with us. I enjoyed both, but the centipedes.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
ew. good thing i always have shoes on. . .
a dead centipede if it crawls on me lol
don't eat in the grass!
a (kinda) cute little haiku - though a little freaky tickly LOL!
good imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typo...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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ew. good thing i always have shoes on. . .
a dead centipede if it crawls on me lol
don't eat in the grass!
a (kinda) cute little haiku - though a little freaky tickly LOL!
good imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typo...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
There's been a picture in my mind as I picture a picnic table and being sitting at the picnic table and having a centipede crawling on the ground below playing not only with me, but with its own feet. Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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There's been a picture in my mind as I picture a picnic table and being sitting at the picnic table and having a centipede crawling on the ground below playing not only with me, but with its own feet. Patricia.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Centipedes, lizards, any creature with scurrying little feet seriously scare me. Fascinating yet totally creepy. Lol. I know that doesn't make any sense but ... I enjoyed your poem. Reminds me that even when you think you're alone, there is always someone or something watching you. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Centipedes, lizards, any creature with scurrying little feet seriously scare me. Fascinating yet totally creepy. Lol. I know that doesn't make any sense but ... I enjoyed your poem. Reminds me that even when you think you're alone, there is always someone or something watching you. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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LoL Helen agrees with you
Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
A very real possibility. Gave seen this happen under a spread blanket at the river in Dominican Republic. The largest one I have ever seen. Your post brings back momeries of my e ife and daughter screaming, and my son, scooping it into the bucket.
RJ
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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A very real possibility. Gave seen this happen under a spread blanket at the river in Dominican Republic. The largest one I have ever seen. Your post brings back momeries of my e ife and daughter screaming, and my son, scooping it into the bucket.
RJ
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 oh no.. they are pretty scary, specially the big ones!
Gypsy
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Yup! You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Gypsy,
This is a great poem. I don't think I want to play footsie with a centipede.
When I was stationed in Hawaii the centipedes were huge. They were as thick as your thumb in diameter and could only be killed using a broom and chopping them into pieces.
So, no thank you I won't be playing with them today.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
This is a great poem. I don't think I want to play footsie with a centipede.
When I was stationed in Hawaii the centipedes were huge. They were as thick as your thumb in diameter and could only be killed using a broom and chopping them into pieces.
So, no thank you I won't be playing with them today.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊
Gypsy
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Gypsy,
You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from lyenochka
Yikes! I don't think I'd want to play footsie with a centipede or anything not human really. A friendly animal - maybe, but centipedes are venomous. And some ants (like the fire ants) have a venous bite!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Yikes! I don't think I'd want to play footsie with a centipede or anything not human really. A friendly animal - maybe, but centipedes are venomous. And some ants (like the fire ants) have a venous bite!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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LoL. The twist is the centipede has many feet.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love ❤️
Marival
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Ah!! Missed that punchline!
Comment from Lana Marie
Oh my gosh, this is a cute one. A really sweet lighthearted Japanese haiku. I didn't know what the difference was from a non-Japanese one,so it was informative to read the notes.
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Oh my gosh, this is a cute one. A really sweet lighthearted Japanese haiku. I didn't know what the difference was from a non-Japanese one,so it was informative to read the notes.
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Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy hugs