Finding a Hunger, Wanting More
Something we all want, as often as possible2 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
An interesting competition entry. Certainly conveys the passion of love. Meets competition conditions. Very difficult to do much within the limited confines but this is not too bad at all. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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An interesting competition entry. Certainly conveys the passion of love. Meets competition conditions. Very difficult to do much within the limited confines but this is not too bad at all. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the review, time has taken a toll, I find passion in other ways, they all give excellent returns.
Comment from Lana Marie
It's challenging to write a whole meaningful passion poem in such limited amount of syllables. You did a good job expressing this for the contest. You got all the syllable counts correct on each line. Good luck to you.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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It's challenging to write a whole meaningful passion poem in such limited amount of syllables. You did a good job expressing this for the contest. You got all the syllable counts correct on each line. Good luck to you.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Since I stumbled through the previous entry, I needed to ask how do I really feel, We all need some passion in our lives. Maybe just a passion just to live well.