Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

This is a great two line Thanksgiving poem. It is sad to think people are homeless during the holidays. People automatically judge them and say it's their own fault. I am not the exception. People end up homeless for a lot of reason.

Those two lines are very powerful. I'm glad I have a home and don't have to roam.

Great job and good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024

Thank you very much for your kind review!

reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 06-Dec-2024

You're welcome

Cecilia

Comment from Noble Collins

Good

Not familiar with this format, but quite interesting. Lots of themes could be developed from this. I am thinking of homelessness or situations where
having or losing a home is involved.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024

It is called a brevity. Thank you!

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, though this is short it has impact and power, yes, there are so many homeless people, and a roof over one's head is something to be truly thankful for, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024

Thank you very much!