Please! don't neglect me
A 2-4-2 Poem for the Contest21 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a short but powerful poem about the power of recognition, love and kindness to overcome the power of hate, fear and despair that is all around us unless we do something about it to make a positive change.`
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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a short but powerful poem about the power of recognition, love and kindness to overcome the power of hate, fear and despair that is all around us unless we do something about it to make a positive change.`
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is beautifully and poignantly presented to the extent it would be difficult to complement the image with the appropriate words in such succinct form. But you've nailed it, in my view, and made this into a winning contender! Well done, Kahpot, and good luck! Debbie
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This is beautifully and poignantly presented to the extent it would be difficult to complement the image with the appropriate words in such succinct form. But you've nailed it, in my view, and made this into a winning contender! Well done, Kahpot, and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, for your very uplifting comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So may children are neglected, even those who have families. Thank you for bringing this problem to the attention of others in this contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
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So may children are neglected, even those who have families. Thank you for bringing this problem to the attention of others in this contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from l.raven
Hi Kahpot, in all my love for God sweet guy...
when it comes to children left behind...not seen...
I question Him...
but I feel He would rather know it bothers me...
than think I should turn a blind eye on them...
children are innocent...and be shown unconditional
love...
I love your poem my sweet friend...very well written...
and your picture speaks for itself...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Hi Kahpot, in all my love for God sweet guy...
when it comes to children left behind...not seen...
I question Him...
but I feel He would rather know it bothers me...
than think I should turn a blind eye on them...
children are innocent...and be shown unconditional
love...
I love your poem my sweet friend...very well written...
and your picture speaks for itself...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Linda, and yes, unfortunately it is the children who get the worst of it, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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your so welcome sweet guy...love xxoo
Comment from shad blunt
You are recognized and appreciated for your poetry. May we always find the love and warmth throughout our lives to keep poetry alive in our hearts. Happy Holidays to you and your family. Shadrach
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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You are recognized and appreciated for your poetry. May we always find the love and warmth throughout our lives to keep poetry alive in our hearts. Happy Holidays to you and your family. Shadrach
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Shadrach, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Begin Again
As the adult, (hopefully) it is our duty to protect the child...the stories we hear of missing children, abuse, sex crimes, and so much more sends chills down my spine. The young need our watchful eye and count on us to be there to stop what happens. The picture and the words are moving.
Smiles, Carol
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As the adult, (hopefully) it is our duty to protect the child...the stories we hear of missing children, abuse, sex crimes, and so much more sends chills down my spine. The young need our watchful eye and count on us to be there to stop what happens. The picture and the words are moving.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Carol, for your very understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a powerful poem. So many children suffer from abuse, poverty and crime. People The picture is a good choice for the words. Good luck in the contest.
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What a powerful poem. So many children suffer from abuse, poverty and crime. People The picture is a good choice for the words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Nicki.B
This is very touching. Unfortunately children are the ones that suffer the most in war and everyday conflicts and its just devastating. Gorgeous image it goes wonderfully with the poem. The words are chose very carefully. Well done and good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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This is very touching. Unfortunately children are the ones that suffer the most in war and everyday conflicts and its just devastating. Gorgeous image it goes wonderfully with the poem. The words are chose very carefully. Well done and good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, and yes, unfortunately children are the ones, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This very brief, concise poem for the 2-4-2 contest prompt points out that people have to be mindful of the needs and rights of children. I liked reading it. It is a reminder to adults who are caught up in their own lives to be mindful of others.
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This very brief, concise poem for the 2-4-2 contest prompt points out that people have to be mindful of the needs and rights of children. I liked reading it. It is a reminder to adults who are caught up in their own lives to be mindful of others.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Aaron Milavec
Everything comes together quite nicely. Even the child in the pic shows some anxiety that fits with the theme so nicely.
Peace and joy in writing,
Aaron
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Everything comes together quite nicely. Even the child in the pic shows some anxiety that fits with the theme so nicely.
Peace and joy in writing,
Aaron
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Wow! Thank you, Aaron, for your exceptional comments and the wonderful six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot