heart rock motel
exploring boundaries and self sacrifice to help others.2 total reviews
Comment from Gayla putnam
Clever, intriguing, thought-provoking, and depressing. You captured a mood and ran with it. The last line summed up the poem perfectly. Heck, I may go back to bed, cover my head, and turn off the news. gayla
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Clever, intriguing, thought-provoking, and depressing. You captured a mood and ran with it. The last line summed up the poem perfectly. Heck, I may go back to bed, cover my head, and turn off the news. gayla
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem dives deep into the complexity of love. The way you describe loving "parasites" or "tyrants" and turn them into something more vulnerable is so thought provoking. I admire how you explore the uncomfortable aspects of love without holding back. Great job!
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Your poem dives deep into the complexity of love. The way you describe loving "parasites" or "tyrants" and turn them into something more vulnerable is so thought provoking. I admire how you explore the uncomfortable aspects of love without holding back. Great job!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024