Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Miracles - Chap 29"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Another great chapter, Carol. I am in awe of where all this comes from and how well you put all these characters together. I will be sorry to finish your book.
Beautifully done, cheers
valda
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Another great chapter, Carol. I am in awe of where all this comes from and how well you put all these characters together. I will be sorry to finish your book.
Beautifully done, cheers
valda
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I kind of hate to say goodbye to my characters as well. But I think we will see them again soon. At least I hope so.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Matthew is putting the pieces together and, with prodding from Garth, pulling his foot out of his a** to do the right thing and get over his pride and misconceptions! I think seeing his own baby with his last name on her really moved that process forward.
Great chapter!
Julie
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Matthew is putting the pieces together and, with prodding from Garth, pulling his foot out of his a** to do the right thing and get over his pride and misconceptions! I think seeing his own baby with his last name on her really moved that process forward.
Great chapter!
Julie
:-)
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Yes, Matthew has always carried a little chip on his shoulder...hopefully this time he might have learned his lesson.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, the bombshell chapter! I'm delighted to see Donatelli take up the mantle of fatherhood, and gladly so. Jenna and baby Margaret's life will change for the better. And so will Matthew's because a baby changes everything!
An exceptional chapter, my friend. A six it is!
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Wow, the bombshell chapter! I'm delighted to see Donatelli take up the mantle of fatherhood, and gladly so. Jenna and baby Margaret's life will change for the better. And so will Matthew's because a baby changes everything!
An exceptional chapter, my friend. A six it is!
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Sorry I am so far behind in answering and thanking everyone for their kindness and enjoyment with the story. Three little girls (well not so little anymore) kept me very busy. I miss them already but thankfully I will surprise them for Christmas. Appreciate your time and thoughts as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
How the heck did I miss this one, I read 31 and realised I had somehow missed where Donatelli stopped being a forgetful dick.
Found the missing chapter LOL
OK that done, I can now go and write my review for 31
Tim x
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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How the heck did I miss this one, I read 31 and realised I had somehow missed where Donatelli stopped being a forgetful dick.
Found the missing chapter LOL
OK that done, I can now go and write my review for 31
Tim x
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thanks Tim...I appreciate you back tracking....Yes, Donatelli has regained most of his senses...I hope.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
I am glad that Matthew is starting to regain some memories, I think it is going to take some time before he and Jenna get back what they once had before his accident, but hopefully with the arrival of their daughter, that'll make this journey quicker for them. An excellent chapter, Carol.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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I am glad that Matthew is starting to regain some memories, I think it is going to take some time before he and Jenna get back what they once had before his accident, but hopefully with the arrival of their daughter, that'll make this journey quicker for them. An excellent chapter, Carol.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thanks Jacob...I hope you enjoy the last two chapters and thank you for following the story. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I'm running through this box of Kleenex awfully quickly. I hope they all have their lives figured out. Allie's visit should have done it for Garth and baby Margaret should have settled the hash Matthew's temper has made of his life. I see happily everafters coming along.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I'm running through this box of Kleenex awfully quickly. I hope they all have their lives figured out. Allie's visit should have done it for Garth and baby Margaret should have settled the hash Matthew's temper has made of his life. I see happily everafters coming along.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Prepare yourself for the next chapter...it's not a tear jerker for sure. I had to wrap things up with Doyle.
Thanks so much as always,
Smiles, Carol
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I am so hopeful Doyle gets his. Nary a tear will be shed.
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Chapter 30 should be one you'll love!
Comment from royowen
You'll have me in a state of tearfulness this morning Carol. The tenderness of these last few chapters have taken the hardness out of the atmosphere, this chapter reminded me of how I felt seeing my beautiful baby girl all those years ago, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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You'll have me in a state of tearfulness this morning Carol. The tenderness of these last few chapters have taken the hardness out of the atmosphere, this chapter reminded me of how I felt seeing my beautiful baby girl all those years ago, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am happy that you enjoyed this chapter, Roy, because the next one is going to send you running for the hills.... Eleanor goes head to head with Doyle for payback! So fasten your seat belt when you start to read.
Smiles, Carol
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Well done, looking forward, I'm playing catch up at the moment, my wife's and younger daughter with grands are visiting elder daughters and grands in Brisbane, it's just the dog and me,
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Enjoy the peace and quiet!
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Heh heh
Comment from lancellot
Another very emotional chapter. I know the female members of readers will gravitate to it, as it is well done. I do wonder about the male, and the male character. Garth, with some hesitation, is extremely emotional for a dude. Yeah, we feel love and loss, but... it is not usually spoken or shown to this extent.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Another very emotional chapter. I know the female members of readers will gravitate to it, as it is well done. I do wonder about the male, and the male character. Garth, with some hesitation, is extremely emotional for a dude. Yeah, we feel love and loss, but... it is not usually spoken or shown to this extent.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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You should read the next chapter Lance...no mushy stuff there. It's Eleanor getting her payback on the man who murdered her and her sister. It's out of my character but I think I did alright. I'd love your opinion.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to see what comes next either. LOL This is really good and you did a great job writing it.
Tears welled in Donatelli's eyes, and his voice broke as he spoke. "I don't deserve this. I don't deserve her." (spoke,)
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I can't wait to see what comes next either. LOL This is really good and you did a great job writing it.
Tears welled in Donatelli's eyes, and his voice broke as he spoke. "I don't deserve this. I don't deserve her." (spoke,)
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Fixed.....
I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
I've caught up! I've said this before, but the positive side of falling behind is the fun of being able to move seamlessly to the next chapter without a wait. Like it will be when you publish this...right?
I am convinced you should and I hope you feel the same!
I would be forever content if this ended right here...
But I know with 99% certainty you will be tying up some loose ends.
Bravisimo, Carol!
More please!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I've caught up! I've said this before, but the positive side of falling behind is the fun of being able to move seamlessly to the next chapter without a wait. Like it will be when you publish this...right?
I am convinced you should and I hope you feel the same!
I would be forever content if this ended right here...
But I know with 99% certainty you will be tying up some loose ends.
Bravisimo, Carol!
More please!
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I do want to publish this one and Spirited Justice. I have to find out how to market them though. But one thing at a time I guess.
Smiles, Carol
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That will be fun! Do local readings, maybe get your local newspaper to run a feature on "local writer publishes" --
be sure to donate your book to the local library and have them put it in circulation. Go to Goodreads and grab reviews there. Reviews on Amazon will help as well. ALWAYS have a few copies of your book with you, in your car! There's more there these ideas came from!