Miracles
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
This was a great chapter, well written and full of different emotions. For Garth feeling twisted about his feelings for Rebecca, the Allie's visit to give him a shove. I do feel our loved ones always look after us, very well told, Carol.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This was a great chapter, well written and full of different emotions. For Garth feeling twisted about his feelings for Rebecca, the Allie's visit to give him a shove. I do feel our loved ones always look after us, very well told, Carol.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Wow! You are so kind to me with the sixes and all the praise. I can't thank you enough. I truly appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
This chapter was loaded with touching moments....Garth getting assurance from Allie to keep living, and loving. And Jenna, Matthew and Margaret needing to sort themselves into the family they need to be.
Nicely done!
Julie
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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This chapter was loaded with touching moments....Garth getting assurance from Allie to keep living, and loving. And Jenna, Matthew and Margaret needing to sort themselves into the family they need to be.
Nicely done!
Julie
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing all the chapters, Julie. I truly appreciate your time and thoughts. I'm trying to get caught up now that I am back at my desk... Wish me luck!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
It seems that telling Donatelli about the baby first was the wrong move. Why not tell him about the rape and that Garth was helping her when she found out that she was pregnant and then tell him that the baby was his. Again, more grief than needed because of poor communication.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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It seems that telling Donatelli about the baby first was the wrong move. Why not tell him about the rape and that Garth was helping her when she found out that she was pregnant and then tell him that the baby was his. Again, more grief than needed because of poor communication.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Sorry I am so far behind in answering and thanking everyone for their kindness and enjoyment with the story. Three little girls (well not so little anymore) kept me very busy. I miss them already but thankfully I will surprise them for Christmas. Appreciate your time and thoughts as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, this was a great chapter and so filled with emotional feelings. They have all been through so much, but I have a feeling that Eleanor can sought it all out. She better had to, because what a mess it would be otherwise. Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Hi Carol, this was a great chapter and so filled with emotional feelings. They have all been through so much, but I have a feeling that Eleanor can sought it all out. She better had to, because what a mess it would be otherwise. Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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It's still got a few rocks in the road but I hope that it ends on the best of high notes. Thankyou so much for continuing to read and enjoy the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a wonderful chapter full of love and hope. Garth is willing to listne and find a new love, but Donatelli is so good at getting things wrong. He needs to listen to his heart before he says anything more that is hurtful. Did you ever have a story why Donatelli is so distrustful?
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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This is a wonderful chapter full of love and hope. Garth is willing to listne and find a new love, but Donatelli is so good at getting things wrong. He needs to listen to his heart before he says anything more that is hurtful. Did you ever have a story why Donatelli is so distrustful?
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It appears we're going to have a happy ending. Matthew will get his act together. I do hope Garth speaks to him and lets him know there was nothing with Jenna but friendship. Garth will work it out with Rebecca.
His chest ached as though his heart were (heart was; heart is singular, so you need was)
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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It appears we're going to have a happy ending. Matthew will get his act together. I do hope Garth speaks to him and lets him know there was nothing with Jenna but friendship. Garth will work it out with Rebecca.
His chest ached as though his heart were (heart was; heart is singular, so you need was)
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Fixed.......
I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Oh! I gave my six last chapter! Can you speed them like celestial jam over all of these?
My respiratory rate is nearly normal...
Although Allies visit had me grabbing for tissues!
I'm blubbering. That's a good thing!
Karenina
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Oh! I gave my six last chapter! Can you speed them like celestial jam over all of these?
My respiratory rate is nearly normal...
Although Allies visit had me grabbing for tissues!
I'm blubbering. That's a good thing!
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I accept all virtual sixes! I like when I can swing the readers emotions from one thought to another...but the tear jerkers are the best! I am a sap for blubbering!
Smiles, Carol
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Sometimes I think grabbing for tissues is the best part. I do love being moved by a story!
Comment from Wendy G
Very well done. A lovely chapter. Garth is now ready to start again and hopefully Matthew will also come to his senses, literally and figuratively and start again too with a new family. Emotionally tense, and moving.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Very well done. A lovely chapter. Garth is now ready to start again and hopefully Matthew will also come to his senses, literally and figuratively and start again too with a new family. Emotionally tense, and moving.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Glad you felt the emotions and how the story is unfolding. I like things to work out...my own version of a fairytale I guess. Thanks for the marvelous thoughts and the stars.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
This is really powerful writing, Carol. I loved the scene with Garth talking to Allie, I could really feel the pain they were both going through. I loved the brilliant scene of Jenna being reunited with Matthew, although it was tough, I really hope Matthew will remember what they once had. Another excellent chapter.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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This is really powerful writing, Carol. I loved the scene with Garth talking to Allie, I could really feel the pain they were both going through. I loved the brilliant scene of Jenna being reunited with Matthew, although it was tough, I really hope Matthew will remember what they once had. Another excellent chapter.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Little Margaret needed a blood transfusion. Did it happen already? Did they get Donatelli's blood without him knowing or agreeing to it?
This was quite an emotional chapter for Miriam, Garth, Allie, Jenna, and Matthew. It sounds as though everything is going to eventually work out.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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Little Margaret needed a blood transfusion. Did it happen already? Did they get Donatelli's blood without him knowing or agreeing to it?
This was quite an emotional chapter for Miriam, Garth, Allie, Jenna, and Matthew. It sounds as though everything is going to eventually work out.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
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I am so far behind on reviews as I try to finish this story within the deadline and enjoy being with my granddaughters. I have faithfully read and greatly appreciated each review. I am thankful for all the time, comments, and reviews everyone has given to my story. There is no way I can catch up on almost 250 reviews, so please accept my thanks and know that I truly appreciate that you have stuck with me throughout the story. Thank you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
