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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mark Schardine
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This poem conjures up a remarkably vivid image, and we can imagine a great variety of stories which could have been inspired by the scene presented. The words and the art go very well together.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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Such a lovely presentation with cool pictures! I can imagine lots of women waiting for their loved one whether because of duty abroad or having to part for other reasons, they have to wait by "the wishful sea".

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love ❤️

    Marival
Comment from kahpot
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Waiting for someone you love to return does bring all kinds of anxieties, I think the calmness of the waters would at least bring some peace, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊 happy Thanksgiving.

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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love the satori!
wading in a sea of wishes
is not only a great image,
but it sounds cool, too!

cool ship in the bottle!
always loved those lol

nice one!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊 happy Thanksgiving.

    Gypsy
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Gypsy,

You always write such beautiful poem. It doesn't matter the style you always nail it. The picture you chose compliments this poem quite nicely.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊 happy Thanksgiving

    Gypsy
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 27-Nov-2024
    You're welcome and Happy Thanksgiving to you.

    Cecilia
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Beautiful colours depicting that evening sky meeting the sea and shore. I also enjoyed the alliteration which gives the haiku such fluency. Thank you for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much 😊 happy Thanksgiving

    Gypsy