Turn Right at the Moon ~ Part 5
1,700 words. Let's get rowdy and meet Gladys!8 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
If I can drink whiskey at 93 out of the bottle, I'll die happy. The ladies seem to have a lot of interest in men that rather verges on the sex warning type of talk, so you might suggest it. I wonder if more people read stories with a hint of sex?
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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If I can drink whiskey at 93 out of the bottle, I'll die happy. The ladies seem to have a lot of interest in men that rather verges on the sex warning type of talk, so you might suggest it. I wonder if more people read stories with a hint of sex?
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Hi, Carol. Well, they haven't read this one much. Thank you for your kind words! Have a great day and Merry Christmas.
mike
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Hi, Carol. Well, they haven't read this one much. Thank you for your kind words! Have a great day and Merry Christmas.
mike
Comment from GWHARGIS
The chit-chat between the older women was very humorous. I could envision a few of my friends sitting around drinking and getting bolder with each statement. I don't see the need for a warning but some might. Great installment. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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The chit-chat between the older women was very humorous. I could envision a few of my friends sitting around drinking and getting bolder with each statement. I don't see the need for a warning but some might. Great installment. Gretchen
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Hi, Gretchen. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and Merry Christmas.
mike
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Hi, Gretchen. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and Merry Christmas.
mike
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love these ladies, Mike! They know how to have a great time and that bottle of whiskey is certainly helping. Your dialogue and humour combine to make this an entertaining read. Never once did I think this needed a warning although a list of characters would certainly have helped me. Merry Christmas, Mike! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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I love these ladies, Mike! They know how to have a great time and that bottle of whiskey is certainly helping. Your dialogue and humour combine to make this an entertaining read. Never once did I think this needed a warning although a list of characters would certainly have helped me. Merry Christmas, Mike! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hi, Debbie. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and Merry Christmas.
mike
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very well written.
As Elaine of the Seinfeld show said, " Sex happens when the nipple first makes its appearance. So, no. I don't think you need a warning.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Very well written.
As Elaine of the Seinfeld show said, " Sex happens when the nipple first makes its appearance. So, no. I don't think you need a warning.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hi, Wayne. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and Merry Christmas.
mike
Comment from lancellot
Nice friendly conversational tones among the ladies. No, I see no need for a sexual content warning.
Chloe stares pleadingly at Pat, and she says, "I've never seen you drink. [Get you a shot."}
- I would check this last sentence again.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Nice friendly conversational tones among the ladies. No, I see no need for a sexual content warning.
Chloe stares pleadingly at Pat, and she says, "I've never seen you drink. [Get you a shot."}
- I would check this last sentence again.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and Merry Christmas.
mike
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a wild bunch of women they are. They sure did have a good time with that bottle of whiskey. This is a great story. It is well organized and flows nicely to completion.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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What a wild bunch of women they are. They sure did have a good time with that bottle of whiskey. This is a great story. It is well organized and flows nicely to completion.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hi, Cecilia. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and Merry Christmas
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You're welcome and you do the same.
Comment from Lana Marie
That was fun, listening to these ladies conversations at the store. It was cute as it went on and finding out that Gladys is going to be 93 years old! You possibly might want to put a sex warning if some people are sensitive to that, but I don't know. It did not seem too graphic yet. Keep on writing!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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That was fun, listening to these ladies conversations at the store. It was cute as it went on and finding out that Gladys is going to be 93 years old! You possibly might want to put a sex warning if some people are sensitive to that, but I don't know. It did not seem too graphic yet. Keep on writing!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hi, Lana. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and Merry Christmas.
mike
Comment from royowen
I don't think the sex warning needs to go on your article Mike, it's only inferred and appeals to the imagination and really nothing more, I love the characters, reminds of sme characters I know, I enjoyed this, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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I don't think the sex warning needs to go on your article Mike, it's only inferred and appeals to the imagination and really nothing more, I love the characters, reminds of sme characters I know, I enjoyed this, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day and Merry Christmas.
mike
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Most welcome