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On The Prowl

A glimpse into a cat's day couplet

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 3 votes.

There are many great entries but I am a cat lover so yours stood out.

The hunting instinct is in their DNA. They are domesticated, they are our pets and we feed them but if they see a mouse, a bird, or a fish in a bowl they will go after them, they are prey to them.

I love the pic and your story,

best of luck!

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Awe! Thank you so much for your review, vote, kind words and well wishes!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A day in the life of a kitty doing his thing here and there is a lot of action here with a dead mouse and a fish hanging onto life, you made me smile with this one, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    It's a win when a writing brings a smile to your face. Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Gayla putnam
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Since I have two cats, I could identify with your couplet. The tempo is snappy and perfectly sums up a cat's busy day in such a humorous fashion. I could almost smell the dead mouse and the flopping fish. gayla

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    lol! Thank you for the review!