On The Prowl
A glimpse into a cat's day couplet3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 3 votes.
There are many great entries but I am a cat lover so yours stood out.
The hunting instinct is in their DNA. They are domesticated, they are our pets and we feed them but if they see a mouse, a bird, or a fish in a bowl they will go after them, they are prey to them.
I love the pic and your story,
best of luck!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 3 votes.
There are many great entries but I am a cat lover so yours stood out.
The hunting instinct is in their DNA. They are domesticated, they are our pets and we feed them but if they see a mouse, a bird, or a fish in a bowl they will go after them, they are prey to them.
I love the pic and your story,
best of luck!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
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Awe! Thank you so much for your review, vote, kind words and well wishes!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A day in the life of a kitty doing his thing here and there is a lot of action here with a dead mouse and a fish hanging onto life, you made me smile with this one, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
A day in the life of a kitty doing his thing here and there is a lot of action here with a dead mouse and a fish hanging onto life, you made me smile with this one, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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It's a win when a writing brings a smile to your face. Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Gayla putnam
Since I have two cats, I could identify with your couplet. The tempo is snappy and perfectly sums up a cat's busy day in such a humorous fashion. I could almost smell the dead mouse and the flopping fish. gayla
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
Since I have two cats, I could identify with your couplet. The tempo is snappy and perfectly sums up a cat's busy day in such a humorous fashion. I could almost smell the dead mouse and the flopping fish. gayla
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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lol! Thank you for the review!