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Lunch box memories.

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Comment from nomi338
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Please forgive me for being silly, but I immediately though of the Popeye cartoon where he says Salami, salami, baloney!
A baloney sandwich and a small bag of chips was my go to for lunch during my grade school years in Detroit. As a teenager, I was too cool for school lunch. I and my friends would duck off campus for a quick smoke and a bottle of coke. The soda, in case you were wondering.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
    Thank you friend for the excllent review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL!! Oh my goodness -- who doesn't remember those days and those homemade lunches? A great offering for the contest here, sir -- thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2024
    Thank you so very much, Yvette.
Comment from l.raven
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Hi Don, we had Baloney sandwiches...but
my favorite was peanut butter and jelly...
in a paper bag...those were the days my friend...

I love your poem...and your picture speaks for itself...
very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thank you Linda for the kind and generous review.
reply by l.raven on 01-Dec-2024
    your so very welcome sweet guy...
    love xxoo 🤗😊🌼
Comment from Shanbreen
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Nicely written 5-7-5 poem. A question: I couldn't understand why Dick and Jane were running. Did they steal somebody's lunch? =)

All the best for the contest entry.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    They were running from all the Baloney. Thank you for your kind of review.
reply by Shanbreen on 01-Dec-2024
    Got it! Thanks for clarifying.
Comment from pome lover
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I remember them, too, but I've forgotten the picture on my lunchbox. Speaking of Roy Rogers, I remember how shocked I was when somewhere I saw the picture of his "Stuffed" horse, Trigger!
Congratulations on winning All Time Best! Cute poem!
Katharine

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    You saw it in Victorville California, Roy and Dale's home town. Thank you so much for the kind review. Don
reply by pome lover on 30-Nov-2024
    only saw the picture, but that was amazing enough :)
Comment from Begin Again
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I remember those books and what we called a Dagwood sandwich: bologna, lettuce, and a dash of mayo/mustard. Today, I add a few chips for the crunch. Great memory wrapped up in so few words. Well done!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Now there is a baloney sandwich called a "Waldo" Half inch slice of Baloney, big slice of onion, lettuce, tomatoe and mayo. Yumm! Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from Sally Law
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Ah, This is so precious. I remember my first-grade reader and finally loving my name, because I was in it: Dick, Jane, and Sally. I just must say I am really envious that you had a Roy Rogers lunchbox. Wow. I was a Brown-bagger. Yes, Baloney is the correct spelling. ;))

I delightful 5-7-5 poetry contest entry. I'm sure you will win.

Sending along my very best today as always, and my good wishes for the contest.
The Famed Sally :))

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Until you mentioned it,I almost forgot about baby Sally. Thank you. And thank you for the special review. Don
reply by Sally Law on 01-Dec-2024
    I didn't like my name until this reader, then I felt special. :)) Sally
Comment from jmdg1954
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Nothing wrong with a good bologna sandwich, even today.
Bologna on Wonder Bread with a little mustard and a stack of ice berg lettuce... dang it's making me hungry.

A cute short poem bringing back memories of my own.

Thank.
John

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Try a "Waldo" Wonder bread, Half inch slice of baloney, big slice of onion, mayo, lettuce and tomato. Yum!!!! Thank you for the nice review.
reply by jmdg1954 on 30-Nov-2024
    Oh yeah... sounds good!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest.

Good 5-7-5 form and composition. The presentation and imagery is beautiful. Well done!

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -  Atticus

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
    Thank you Gypsy for your kind and generous review. Don
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Thanks for those memories. Honestly, I can't remember what characters were on my lunch box or not. For almost all of my elementary school days, we walked home for 1 hour lunch break, regardless of weather issue. By 6th -7th grade, I biked most days to and from home/school.

Mark

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 29-Nov-2024
    Thank you Mark for the most generous review.