Comment from
Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great story. It is so true that you could blink and everything could change. We need to live in the moment and cherish the memories.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
This is an inventive story reminding us to appreciate and live in the moment as everything can change in an instant. You captured the horror of death and how the grief can grip us like a vice here. I enjoyed the ride and good luck with the contest.
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(loneliness)
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024