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A Hushed Song

My heart sang for him... Until he left

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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Keely,

You are quite talented my dear. This Nonet is perfect. I did one yesterday and got beat up for it. Let's just say it wasn't pretty. After much guidance from my fan story friends I made it right.

I wish I had found Fanstory sooner. I honestly don't know how I stumbled upon it.

Well done and good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    Hi Cecilia!
    Thank you so much for your kind words!!! This was my first nonet so I'm shocked it turned out as good as it did. I'm sure your nonet was great however!

    I too wish I found Fanstory sooner. I've gotten a lot of really good feedback since joining.


    Thank you again and I hope you have a wonderful day.

    (I'm in Texas too by the way!)

    -Keely
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 27-Nov-2024
    Keely,

    No my Nonet was beat up. Not to interested in doing another anytime soon.

    What part of Texas are you in?



    Cecilia
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    I'm about 30 minutes outside of Austin!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A sad song that happens to many... Good formation to your nonet entry although I would recommend centering it to get the full effect... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
    Hi!
    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for leaving such a nice review! This was my first nonet, so I had some doubts about it. I'll definitely go back and center the lines. I didn't even think of that.

    Thanks again and I hope you have a wonderful day/night (not sure what time it is where you are. It's currently 11:35 A.M in Texas where I am :) )

    Best wishes,
    Keely
reply by Y. M. Roger on 26-Nov-2024
    Anytime, Keely! Good luck with every thing over there in the Lone Star state... from here on the front porch in central Alabama! ;) ;) Yvette