A Hushed Song
My heart sang for him... Until he left2 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Keely,
You are quite talented my dear. This Nonet is perfect. I did one yesterday and got beat up for it. Let's just say it wasn't pretty. After much guidance from my fan story friends I made it right.
I wish I had found Fanstory sooner. I honestly don't know how I stumbled upon it.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
Keely,
You are quite talented my dear. This Nonet is perfect. I did one yesterday and got beat up for it. Let's just say it wasn't pretty. After much guidance from my fan story friends I made it right.
I wish I had found Fanstory sooner. I honestly don't know how I stumbled upon it.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Hi Cecilia!
Thank you so much for your kind words!!! This was my first nonet so I'm shocked it turned out as good as it did. I'm sure your nonet was great however!
I too wish I found Fanstory sooner. I've gotten a lot of really good feedback since joining.
Thank you again and I hope you have a wonderful day.
(I'm in Texas too by the way!)
-Keely
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Keely,
No my Nonet was beat up. Not to interested in doing another anytime soon.
What part of Texas are you in?
Cecilia
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I'm about 30 minutes outside of Austin!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A sad song that happens to many... Good formation to your nonet entry although I would recommend centering it to get the full effect... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
A sad song that happens to many... Good formation to your nonet entry although I would recommend centering it to get the full effect... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Hi!
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for leaving such a nice review! This was my first nonet, so I had some doubts about it. I'll definitely go back and center the lines. I didn't even think of that.
Thanks again and I hope you have a wonderful day/night (not sure what time it is where you are. It's currently 11:35 A.M in Texas where I am :) )
Best wishes,
Keely
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Anytime, Keely! Good luck with every thing over there in the Lone Star state... from here on the front porch in central Alabama! ;) ;) Yvette