Comment from
Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a really great Thanksgiving shocker story. I did not see that twist at all. You are an excellent story teller. The story flowed well throughout.
Now lets go eat some baby johnny. Lol
Great job and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
Thank you for your kind comments and for reviewing.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 07-Dec-2024
Monica,
You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from
Lana Marie
What sounded like a good Thanksgiving didn't sound great with that mother! She was obviously extremely annoying the whole entire time! And yes, you shocked me at the end. I was wondering where the punch line was going to be throughout this story and then..... it had to be a baby... whaaaaa
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
Thank you for your kind comments and for reviewing. She was actually based on my real life mother - now you know what I deal with on a daily basis - lol.