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Viewing comments for Chapter 110 "a Few Things I'm Grateful For".
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Everything about this poem is me. I love my grandchildren, I've always lived by the sea, and wouldn't want to live anywhere else, I love a beautiful sunset/rise, and I love to lay underneath the stars at night. And I love my FS friends. That is a lot of loving!! Lol. Your poem is wonderful, my friend, and you always have the perfect picture to go with them. Loved it! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Everything about this poem is me. I love my grandchildren, I've always lived by the sea, and wouldn't want to live anywhere else, I love a beautiful sunset/rise, and I love to lay underneath the stars at night. And I love my FS friends. That is a lot of loving!! Lol. Your poem is wonderful, my friend, and you always have the perfect picture to go with them. Loved it! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs 🤗
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
I read your words, and instantly feel within ease and at peace. I follow down the page and allow the grace to absorb into the pores of my existence. I hear, I feel, I see and taste... and the best of all, I connect to them all as your beautiful soul and being sings a tune of gratitude that warms this readers soul and heart.
So beautifully composed and delivered!
With our thoughts we create...
the melody of our heart.
I hope you had a magic thanksgiving!
Kindest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Hi MariVal,
I read your words, and instantly feel within ease and at peace. I follow down the page and allow the grace to absorb into the pores of my existence. I hear, I feel, I see and taste... and the best of all, I connect to them all as your beautiful soul and being sings a tune of gratitude that warms this readers soul and heart.
So beautifully composed and delivered!
With our thoughts we create...
the melody of our heart.
I hope you had a magic thanksgiving!
Kindest regards,
James.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Hello, James, I am grateful for your exceptional six stars review and generous feedback. Your reviews are so beatiful and insightful. You know what I mean.
I had a great Thanksgiving, drama free, good food, and my granddaughter was with us. I hope your Thanksgiving was wonderful too.
Besitos y abrazos
MariVal
"I have lived, I have lost... but I have never forgotten the joy of belonging." - anonymous
Comment from kahpot
Wonderful, there is so very much that we should be and are thankful for, here down under we don't celebrate it that much, (not sure why) I think we should, anyway, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Wonderful, there is so very much that we should be and are thankful for, here down under we don't celebrate it that much, (not sure why) I think we should, anyway, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
We have much to be thankful for in America, despite it being a country that is far from being perfect. We still have certain freedoms that many places do not. I tgank you for expressing this so candidly. Hope you are having a great day.
RJ
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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We have much to be thankful for in America, despite it being a country that is far from being perfect. We still have certain freedoms that many places do not. I tgank you for expressing this so candidly. Hope you are having a great day.
RJ
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and returning you being thankful for me, ditto. I posted a story today but changed my mind as it was critcal of Trump supporters and I decided it was a bit harsh, it's how I feel, true, but mean
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and returning you being thankful for me, ditto. I posted a story today but changed my mind as it was critcal of Trump supporters and I decided it was a bit harsh, it's how I feel, true, but mean
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Yeah, i wouldn't use criticism of maga folks in fanstory but i do critizise trump. Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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Same here, although sometimes its so hard to understand them and hold your fire.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Those are very similar to things I'm grateful for. Sunday with I was facetiming with my youngest granddaughters, Eleanor, 4 years old, turned her phone around to show me the beautiful pink sunset. We both agreed how beautiful it was. Thank you for sharing this perfect poem and presentation with us.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Those are very similar to things I'm grateful for. Sunday with I was facetiming with my youngest granddaughters, Eleanor, 4 years old, turned her phone around to show me the beautiful pink sunset. We both agreed how beautiful it was. Thank you for sharing this perfect poem and presentation with us.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
Oftentimes your writing makes me wonder who you are. I wonder about your real name, do you have someone in your life. Any kids although I think you already mentioned you do.
I really like this poem and me too, I'm grateful for fanstory friends. I've been a bit behind on everything ever since FS changed their format. I have a hard enough time seeing as it is having optic neuropathy and working on a phone.
Have a Happy Thanksgiving!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Oftentimes your writing makes me wonder who you are. I wonder about your real name, do you have someone in your life. Any kids although I think you already mentioned you do.
I really like this poem and me too, I'm grateful for fanstory friends. I've been a bit behind on everything ever since FS changed their format. I have a hard enough time seeing as it is having optic neuropathy and working on a phone.
Have a Happy Thanksgiving!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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My real name is MariVal, I'm happily divorced, I have two daughters and a son. I have one grandson and two granddaughters.
Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Wendy G
Thankful for you too, and for the beautiful poems you write with such artistic presentation. I hope you and your have a wonderful time of Thanksgiving. Many blessings.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thankful for you too, and for the beautiful poems you write with such artistic presentation. I hope you and your have a wonderful time of Thanksgiving. Many blessings.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, I wish you a happy Thanksgiving too, though I know your Thanksgiving is different than ours but wonderful too.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
I really like this poem.
It's sweet and sincere. A wonderful poem for every day or especially for the season of thanks.
Blessings and best wishes.
Cindy
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Gypsy,
I really like this poem.
It's sweet and sincere. A wonderful poem for every day or especially for the season of thanks.
Blessings and best wishes.
Cindy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
aw this was so sweet and perfect for this week. . . or any day really. . .
love the evening breeze by the sea, lake full of life, and sky full of stars - cool imagery!
cute, fun pic of water-playing kids, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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aw this was so sweet and perfect for this week. . . or any day really. . .
love the evening breeze by the sea, lake full of life, and sky full of stars - cool imagery!
cute, fun pic of water-playing kids, too
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊