Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Inside the mind of a killer"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is quite well written, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. You're sitting in the structure and your paragraphing are both excellent as is your punctuation. All of these things combined made it for a very nice story to listen to. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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This is quite well written, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. You're sitting in the structure and your paragraphing are both excellent as is your punctuation. All of these things combined made it for a very nice story to listen to. Patricia.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really got pulled into this! The way you created this character is so fascinating. It feels like there's this quiet intensity in his thoughts that builds throughout the story. I like how you show his inner struggles. It's a gripping chapter and I'm curious to see where it goes next. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I really got pulled into this! The way you created this character is so fascinating. It feels like there's this quiet intensity in his thoughts that builds throughout the story. I like how you show his inner struggles. It's a gripping chapter and I'm curious to see where it goes next. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much!