The world we live
No justification for who stays or who goes2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Hard to read.. Change the foreground color to white when you edit it. This is such a deeply emotional piece. I can feel the pain and confusion in your words. But also the love you have for your dad. The questions you pose are so raw. The way you share them makes your feelings come through so clearly. The line about heaven getting dirty and taking him early is so powerful. You've created something really meaningful here, and it's clear how much he meant to you. Keep writing - it's a beautiful way to honor him.
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Hard to read.. Change the foreground color to white when you edit it. This is such a deeply emotional piece. I can feel the pain and confusion in your words. But also the love you have for your dad. The questions you pose are so raw. The way you share them makes your feelings come through so clearly. The line about heaven getting dirty and taking him early is so powerful. You've created something really meaningful here, and it's clear how much he meant to you. Keep writing - it's a beautiful way to honor him.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your words cannot be seen here Patrick, all we see is a black screen. Try highlighting your words and then I shall come back and review properly, love Dolly x
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Your words cannot be seen here Patrick, all we see is a black screen. Try highlighting your words and then I shall come back and review properly, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024