2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from kahpot
Love this, and the message, (baby steps) is the way I am taking it, for us to reach our dreams will take some time, but with honesty and determination we can achieve, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Love this, and the message, (baby steps) is the way I am taking it, for us to reach our dreams will take some time, but with honesty and determination we can achieve, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I never thought of mountains moving, but when one thinks about one small rock at a time. It does makes perfect sense. Thank you for sharing the poem and the presentation with us.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I never thought of mountains moving, but when one thinks about one small rock at a time. It does makes perfect sense. Thank you for sharing the poem and the presentation with us.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
reminds me of miley's song "the climb"
great satori with one small rock at a time
love the purple, too
an excellent two-liner!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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reminds me of miley's song "the climb"
great satori with one small rock at a time
love the purple, too
an excellent two-liner!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
The two-line Haiku is quickly becoming my favorite version of the Haiku. Your verses, though brief, emphasize the importance of patience and resistance to accomplish a task that might seem insurmountable. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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The two-line Haiku is quickly becoming my favorite version of the Haiku. Your verses, though brief, emphasize the importance of patience and resistance to accomplish a task that might seem insurmountable. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much. Haiku is one of my favorites too. After writing long free verse I need a haiku to feel balanced.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from lyenochka
I like it! This reminds of Jesus telling us that with faith we can move mountains.
The structure of your haiku reminds me of the kautauta book you created a long time ago and we had so many adding two line poems to your book.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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I like it! This reminds of Jesus telling us that with faith we can move mountains.
The structure of your haiku reminds me of the kautauta book you created a long time ago and we had so many adding two line poems to your book.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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You read my renga book chapters? Yes, one poet writes 2 lines and the next one 3. I have been thinking about starting a new one but I have 3 clubs to manage.
Thank you, big sister.
Love,
Marival ❤️
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You have enough going on. You got so many participating. I even did one! So did Roy!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a beautiful Haiku poem. Those two lines are really deep and powerful if you think about it. Th picture compliments the poem nicely.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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This is a beautiful Haiku poem. Those two lines are really deep and powerful if you think about it. Th picture compliments the poem nicely.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from GWHARGIS
This made me think about that saying , "how do you eat an elephant? One bite at a time. Moving mountains sounds the same. Moving a mountain would be one rock at a time. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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This made me think about that saying , "how do you eat an elephant? One bite at a time. Moving mountains sounds the same. Moving a mountain would be one rock at a time. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊