Willing Hearts
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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Barbara,
This is a great story. It flows very nicely from start to finish. I think it's sweet that Noah is making Sami take lessons to for her protection. That's love
One small error:
"You'll see." He stood. "Laura, (we'll will) see you for Sunday dinner."
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Barbara,
This is a great story. It flows very nicely from start to finish. I think it's sweet that Noah is making Sami take lessons to for her protection. That's love
One small error:
"You'll see." He stood. "Laura, (we'll will) see you for Sunday dinner."
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I'm off to fix it.
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Sankey
This was a very good chapter, especially the self-defence aspect. I wonder what you have for us after this story finishes? Here's that American extra, again! "You don't need to[o]."
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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This was a very good chapter, especially the self-defence aspect. I wonder what you have for us after this story finishes? Here's that American extra, again! "You don't need to[o]."
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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I have my next story almost finished. A little different. LOl Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, that was a great chapter. We're slowly getting there, where their engagement will be official. Only Sami seems to be ignorant of the fact, or so it appears. I might be wrong, of course. Until the next chapter. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Hi Barbara, that was a great chapter. We're slowly getting there, where their engagement will be official. Only Sami seems to be ignorant of the fact, or so it appears. I might be wrong, of course. Until the next chapter. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Sami doesn't fully understand everything.
Comment from lancellot
Well, I guess things are wrapping up, so certain things in the story have to come together, even if some were decided weeks ago??? But if the author likes it and the fan base, then go for it.
notes:
I want to have the ring ready. Do you know her size?"
-What? Why would he think her father knows this? Mom, maybe, but not dad. Wouldn't a guy in 2024 or 23 simply take her to Jared's to pick out her own ring?
"We decided it should go to you because you spent the most time with Grandma Leya.
- Then why explain the tradition, if you're just going to break it?
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Well, I guess things are wrapping up, so certain things in the story have to come together, even if some were decided weeks ago??? But if the author likes it and the fan base, then go for it.
notes:
I want to have the ring ready. Do you know her size?"
-What? Why would he think her father knows this? Mom, maybe, but not dad. Wouldn't a guy in 2024 or 23 simply take her to Jared's to pick out her own ring?
"We decided it should go to you because you spent the most time with Grandma Leya.
- Then why explain the tradition, if you're just going to break it?
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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He's talking to her mother, about the size of the ring. No, some guys like to surprise their lady with the ring. I figured many readers would know the tradition and wonder how Sami got the ring. Thank you for the kind review.
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I see. Don't you think he is moving too fast? They really haven't properly dated or spent a week apart living and working like normal people.
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That's basically the reason for this entire chapter.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
The chapter highlights Sami's personal growth as she commits to improving her vigilance.I'm also glad the bond between her and Noah has deepened. Despite their differences, they reaffirm their commitment to making their relationship work.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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The chapter highlights Sami's personal growth as she commits to improving her vigilance.I'm also glad the bond between her and Noah has deepened. Despite their differences, they reaffirm their commitment to making their relationship work.
Well done.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
thanks for an inspiring romance fiction story that has left me captivated until the last paragraph, this would be so interesting for a script,
many kind regards,
Sarah Probe
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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thanks for an inspiring romance fiction story that has left me captivated until the last paragraph, this would be so interesting for a script,
many kind regards,
Sarah Probe
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a crafty, clever way to get Sami's ring size! Lol. It sounds lovely too. I hope nothing goes wrong and they do get engaged soon. I like the idea of having lessons in self defence, it is absolutely necessary for a girl walking out alone to be alert all the time. Especially these days. This was a really good chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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What a crafty, clever way to get Sami's ring size! Lol. It sounds lovely too. I hope nothing goes wrong and they do get engaged soon. I like the idea of having lessons in self defence, it is absolutely necessary for a girl walking out alone to be alert all the time. Especially these days. This was a really good chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
Sami seems to be adjusting to being home but I hope she doesn't get to comfortable. I think that is Noah's thoughts as well and he is doing his best to teach her to be on the alert at all times. Not a bad idea for all of us these days. And the sapphire ring... I wear two of them (first ring Mike gave me) that should be a lovely story and also hopefully part of Sami's ring.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Sami seems to be adjusting to being home but I hope she doesn't get to comfortable. I think that is Noah's thoughts as well and he is doing his best to teach her to be on the alert at all times. Not a bad idea for all of us these days. And the sapphire ring... I wear two of them (first ring Mike gave me) that should be a lovely story and also hopefully part of Sami's ring.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.