Thanksgiving Turkey Revenge
The tables are turned7 total reviews
Comment from David Knapp
When is this going to be made into a movie? Because it would be awesome! Great job! You have a knack for this. You should try your hand at writing a full length book based on this.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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When is this going to be made into a movie? Because it would be awesome! Great job! You have a knack for this. You should try your hand at writing a full length book based on this.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thank you, David. It turned out better than I thought. I would have to write so much more to turn it into a full length book lol
But you never know I could kind of see the movie unfolding in my mind as well.
Thank you for your generous review!
Comment from Tim Margetts
What a great story, and one that had me cheering on the feathered critters.
Your line of 'They know'
Now don't get me wrong, I will chow down on my turkey like the best of us, but this type of story, one where the underdog and victim get a chance to hit back, just makes me feel happy.
You got my vote and good luck
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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What a great story, and one that had me cheering on the feathered critters.
Your line of 'They know'
Now don't get me wrong, I will chow down on my turkey like the best of us, but this type of story, one where the underdog and victim get a chance to hit back, just makes me feel happy.
You got my vote and good luck
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I love that you liked it and that you were cheering them on! And yes, I do like drumsticks so if I'm somewhere where they have turkey, I too will indulge in the deliciousness. But it was fun writing my very first horror/thriller.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love his! Your title grabbed me from the start. And your horror evolved so vividly I could almost imagine it happening in real life. Never too graphic but imaginative and detailed enough to give those greedy folk a good run for their money. Why this appealed to me and without wishing to appear a party-pooper, I just get fed-up with all this obsession with killing beautiful creatures at Christmas.
the start of our families(') Thanksgiving....
An excellent entry for the contest and a strong contender I hope ;) Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I love his! Your title grabbed me from the start. And your horror evolved so vividly I could almost imagine it happening in real life. Never too graphic but imaginative and detailed enough to give those greedy folk a good run for their money. Why this appealed to me and without wishing to appear a party-pooper, I just get fed-up with all this obsession with killing beautiful creatures at Christmas.
the start of our families(') Thanksgiving....
An excellent entry for the contest and a strong contender I hope ;) Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. It was interesting how my mind worked as I continued to write it. It was my first try at this type of category.
I know those poor little turkeys. I'll be at tasty, but it is interesting that people just don't celebrate with other things for Christmas. We usually have chili.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is absolutely wonderful. By far the best one. I loved it, sorry I have no sixes left. Happy Turkey day. We are having ham. Love to you and yours. Karen
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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This is absolutely wonderful. By far the best one. I loved it, sorry I have no sixes left. Happy Turkey day. We are having ham. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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Thank you, Karen, it turned out better than I thought, as I continued to write it. As I have never tried my hand on writing a horror/thriller, I surprised myself at where my head kept going with it. Thank you for your great review.
Comment from Noble Collins
Funny how this works. I'm reading this for the second time and I'm supposed to comment again, I suppose.
Do these macabre visions occur often ?
Writing deserves five stars anyway.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Funny how this works. I'm reading this for the second time and I'm supposed to comment again, I suppose.
Do these macabre visions occur often ?
Writing deserves five stars anyway.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Well, I don't know what happened if you ended up having to do this twice. Well thanks for taking the time to read this crazy story.
Comment from DonandVicki
Your flash fiction brought back memories of the Alfred Hitchcock move the "Birds". A shocker for sure and a good reason to become a vegetarian. A good read.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Your flash fiction brought back memories of the Alfred Hitchcock move the "Birds". A shocker for sure and a good reason to become a vegetarian. A good read.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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It was weird writing it because it got a little morbid. I've never written a horror story before. I think I've heard of that movie before, but never have seen it, now that you mention it.
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And thank you for taking the time to read it even with its violence warning.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, this was so intense! I loved how you built up the eerie atmosphere right from the start. The idea of turkeys plotting revenge is so creative! You've crafted a haunting Thanksgiving tale. Is it Halloween! haha.
Amazing work!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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Wow, this was so intense! I loved how you built up the eerie atmosphere right from the start. The idea of turkeys plotting revenge is so creative! You've crafted a haunting Thanksgiving tale. Is it Halloween! haha.
Amazing work!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
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I know I couldn't believe how intense it got even for me. I've never written anything like this, so it was quite interesting the way that my mind flowed as I continued to write it. Thank you for stopping in and reviewing my first horror/thriller story. I don't know if it falls under both of those categories or what.
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I know I couldn't believe how intense it got even for me. I've never written anything like this, so it was quite interesting the way that my mind flowed as I continued to write it. Thank you for stopping in and reviewing my first horror/thriller story. I don't know if it falls under both of those categories or what.
