Nightfall
dawn awaits at daybreak4 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer!
What an intriguing poetic form filled with a plethora of beautiful images!
I especially love:
Voices call
branches sprawl
Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes!
diane
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Hello, Mystery Writer!
What an intriguing poetic form filled with a plethora of beautiful images!
I especially love:
Voices call
branches sprawl
Thank you for sharing!
Best wishes!
diane
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
What a lovely couplet poem. I love the rhyme and sing-songy quality of this poem. It flows nicely from beginning to end. The picture compliments the nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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What a lovely couplet poem. I love the rhyme and sing-songy quality of this poem. It flows nicely from beginning to end. The picture compliments the nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 02-Dec-2024
Comment from Rick Gardner
Excellent, takes you in and will not release you until it is done with you. Shadows will hide the evil that awaits. Look both ways, travel with care. Something is watching, stalking you, waiting to pounce on you.
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Excellent, takes you in and will not release you until it is done with you. Shadows will hide the evil that awaits. Look both ways, travel with care. Something is watching, stalking you, waiting to pounce on you.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
What a lovely journey through a night in the wilderness. The view of the woods, the sounds of the animals. All come together into a cohesive whole
Nicely done
Tim
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What a lovely journey through a night in the wilderness. The view of the woods, the sounds of the animals. All come together into a cohesive whole
Nicely done
Tim
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024