Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Miracles - Chap 19"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Julie Helms
Love it. Lots of action, ghostly magic, and a great lesson in self-worth!
A couple comments:
He's acting like a rooster in a hen house.
(henhouse)
This crew *plays* dirty, and we're walking into their *playground*."
(Brilliant!)
His thoughts *are* interrupted by a voice, low and familiar.
(were)
Yet another great chapter churned out in record time. I'm only a little envious. Haha.
Julie
:-)
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Love it. Lots of action, ghostly magic, and a great lesson in self-worth!
A couple comments:
He's acting like a rooster in a hen house.
(henhouse)
This crew *plays* dirty, and we're walking into their *playground*."
(Brilliant!)
His thoughts *are* interrupted by a voice, low and familiar.
(were)
Yet another great chapter churned out in record time. I'm only a little envious. Haha.
Julie
:-)
** This reviewer has pledged to rate in accordance with site guidelines.**
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
Comment from Ulla
Oh, I loved this, Carol. She, Eleanor that is, is getting her way with them all. I love the reactions of them all. The attack on Bruiser was priceless. Loved it. All best, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Oh, I loved this, Carol. She, Eleanor that is, is getting her way with them all. I love the reactions of them all. The attack on Bruiser was priceless. Loved it. All best, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Good morning! Thanks for enjoying the story. I appreciate your time and kindness. Writing a novel in a month is becoming a "hectic" chore. (Especially with holidays and a vacation).
Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
What's up? Did Eleanor get a spirit promotion, what with her using superpowers--and rematerializing people now? Who knew that was in her bag of tricks!
I want to go to ghost school!
It seemed to do the trick, though...
I chuckled when Eleanor grabbed a branch and swing at Bruiser, hardening back to the baseball game.
You're smoooth, lady!
Karenina
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What's up? Did Eleanor get a spirit promotion, what with her using superpowers--and rematerializing people now? Who knew that was in her bag of tricks!
I want to go to ghost school!
It seemed to do the trick, though...
I chuckled when Eleanor grabbed a branch and swing at Bruiser, hardening back to the baseball game.
You're smoooth, lady!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
Comment from royowen
Ghosts, even petite determined one's can beat someone like bruiser, a no good loser and a brute of a man, fit only to lean on people, mostly smaller than him, but Danni steals Crystal away to safety, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Ghosts, even petite determined one's can beat someone like bruiser, a no good loser and a brute of a man, fit only to lean on people, mostly smaller than him, but Danni steals Crystal away to safety, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Danni wasn't going to back down but I think she was lucky when Eleanor joined her. She had a better chance of getting Crystal to safety. Thanks as always, Roy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
These ghosts more than even the odds. Eleanor seems like she is everywhere at once. Has she cloned herself. lol I looks like Joeys Dad got his son straightened out with Eleanor's help.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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These ghosts more than even the odds. Eleanor seems like she is everywhere at once. Has she cloned herself. lol I looks like Joeys Dad got his son straightened out with Eleanor's help.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Yes, I like it when I can write in something where the parent shows the child (adult or not) that they still have a few things to share with them. thanks as always....
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
It sounds like the crooks are being rounded up, and the only things left will be mending broken relationships and mending Donatelli. I believe you will finish this book in the next week, Carol!
Look forward to the next read.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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It sounds like the crooks are being rounded up, and the only things left will be mending broken relationships and mending Donatelli. I believe you will finish this book in the next week, Carol!
Look forward to the next read.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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There are still some surprises around the corner, and I'm not sure I can get them all in and have time to read, review, etc. I've given it a shot. Thanks for reading and enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
nice, it could be fun being a walking talking ghost, and I know a few people I would like to visit,lol Iwouldn't be mean or anything just mischievious
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nice, it could be fun being a walking talking ghost, and I know a few people I would like to visit,lol Iwouldn't be mean or anything just mischievious
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Jacob1395
Yes, that was a brilliant way to end the chapter, Carol, I was really smiling as Eleanor emerged as I just knew that Bruiser wouldn't stand a chance against her. Another excellent, entertaining read, I really enjoyed it.
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Yes, that was a brilliant way to end the chapter, Carol, I was really smiling as Eleanor emerged as I just knew that Bruiser wouldn't stand a chance against her. Another excellent, entertaining read, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Wendy G
How very handy and helpful Eleanor is. She's so scary because of all she can do while unseen. And she has helped Jason to change Joey's mind about his involvement. Great chapter!
Wendy
a row of Harley's (Harleys)
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How very handy and helpful Eleanor is. She's so scary because of all she can do while unseen. And she has helped Jason to change Joey's mind about his involvement. Great chapter!
Wendy
a row of Harley's (Harleys)
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Are you typing all night and watching little girls by day? You are amazing. This is a great change in the story. Eleanor got Jason involved and he convinced his son to do the right thing. Also, it's great to know Crystal has been saved.
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Are you typing all night and watching little girls by day? You are amazing. This is a great change in the story. Eleanor got Jason involved and he convinced his son to do the right thing. Also, it's great to know Crystal has been saved.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024