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Think Young

Getting old is a journey

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Comment from AP Apgar
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What an excellent poem and picture presentation supporting - your poem is nicely written - with a good message about how age effects older folks - and the importance of maintaining a positive attitude in spite of the inevitable - Well done - Alan

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you for your very nice review it as much
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Patricia.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem.
-Very good opening lines
establish the premise of aging.
-Good examples follow that
with losing our balance and falling.
-Good concluding lines about thinking young.
-Very well done.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and even a nice review
reply by Pam (respa) on 24-Nov-2024
    You are very welcome.
Comment from EeanBlack
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That image of that beautiful butterfly. Not the one above the cup, the one holding the cup. That's every man's dream. I pray someday I'll have that image. I have that dream, so all is not lost. I just need to allow that perfect butterfly to land. Does she even exist? This was just beautiful.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much very very delightful review
reply by EeanBlack on 24-Nov-2024
    Anytime.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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I used that picture on your hospital book. It has a lovely butterfly. Do not let your outsides inform your insides. I am many ages. so, I am getting ready to take my shower and put on my Minnie mouse pajamas, so I am maybe 7?
Love to you and yours. Karen

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving a nice review
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 24-Nov-2024
    :-)
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Your body may be aging a bit, but your mind is still very sharp, which is a real blessing for us who read your writing. I know what you mean about an uneasy gait and losing our balance. Think young -- good advice. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much for stopping by reading my work and leaving a nice
reply by Carol Clark2 on 25-Nov-2024
    You're welcome. Have a blessed holiday.
    Carol
Comment from judiverse
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Lovely artwork, and great work with your Cadea format. I think young. I think I'm no older than 50. Yes, attitude has a lot to do with it. You're right. We're old when we think we're old. However, we don't just decide to fall and break some bones. Our bodies age, and we can't escape that. We can still be engaged and interested in life, even if our physical activities are limited. judi

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you for stopping by my work and they make such a nice review
reply by judiverse on 24-Nov-2024
    You're welcome. Enjoy your Sunday. judi
Comment from Teri7
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Patricia, This is a very well written poem full of great descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Thank you for letting us know about your experience when thinking too young! I am so sorry you had the falls my friend! May God bless you and keep you on a big healing streak. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you for taking time to read a review of my work. I appreciate it.
Comment from RJ Heritage
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It is a beautiful and positive perspective we all need to adopt. I like your colors and your vivid imagery. Thank you for sharing this one with me. Have a blessed evening.
RJ

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read the review my work. It is very much appreciate
reply by RJ Heritage on 24-Nov-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I agree with you here, when we think we are old, we suddenly age! Thinking we are young and agile is the best way to retain some youth inside us, I loved your words here Patricia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read it at work. It is appreciated
Comment from evilynne
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Well, true, you are only as old as you feel - but no break dancing, Patricia! I do think you meant to use gait not gate, but otherwise it is really well done! Evi



















 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2024
    Thank you for stopping by. I committed such a nice review