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The Wind

Haiku

18 total reviews 
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good description of the wind and
the impact it had.
-A very good satori line.
-Thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for stopping by.
reply by Pam (respa) on 25-Nov-2024
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is an awesome three line poem. The words hold a lot of meaning and are very powerful. The picture compliments the poem nicely.


Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much..I am glad you liked my Haiku.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 25-Nov-2024
    Sanku,

    You're welcome

    Cecilia
Comment from jaded831
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I can feel the embrace of a warm breeze on a summer's day. Your poem ignites the imagination and brings the reader to a good place. The picture goes well with your poem. You did an excellent job.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your encouraging review.
Comment from harmony13
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! The author's words were filled comfort and awe.
Happy Thanksgiving! Maria

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for stopping by ..Happy Thanksgiving to you too.
Comment from Tim Margetts
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I adore the use of 'heaven's silken sigh.' to illustrate the wind in such a visual way.
Glorious indeed.
I thank you for sharing this great short poem
Tim

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for liking ny Haiku I wanted to give a sensory appeal .Glad i succeeded in it.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hi Sanku.
Your descriptive language in this Haiku paints a vivid picture in the mind of the reader. Through each line you continue your clear message from each line to the following.
Robert

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much ..
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 25-Nov-2024
    You're welcome.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Lovely personificationof the wind in this poem. I especially liked "heavens silken sigh". Thanks for sharing this Haiku.----------------------------

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Rene Tyo
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This is a really lovely poem. It reflects on a mood or feeling we likely all have had, and sums it up in a wonderful way. This is so evocative of a warm summer breeze. Well done, thank you for taking me back to great memories.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    THANk you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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If the wind is gentle, it can caress and touch our skin with a soothing hug as you say here, I enjoyed your inventive words to describe that gentle wind that takes to a heavenly place, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for stopping b
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Such a soothing thought, emotion, and poem. Thank you for sharing this message with us. I am sure it's God who wraps us in a soothing hug. He's been there for me often.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    thank you very much for stopping by.