The Wind
Haiku18 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good description of the wind and
the impact it had.
-A very good satori line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sanku.
-You wrote a good haiku with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery.
-Good description of the wind and
the impact it had.
-A very good satori line.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is an awesome three line poem. The words hold a lot of meaning and are very powerful. The picture compliments the poem nicely.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
This is an awesome three line poem. The words hold a lot of meaning and are very powerful. The picture compliments the poem nicely.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much..I am glad you liked my Haiku.
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Sanku,
You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from jaded831
I can feel the embrace of a warm breeze on a summer's day. Your poem ignites the imagination and brings the reader to a good place. The picture goes well with your poem. You did an excellent job.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
I can feel the embrace of a warm breeze on a summer's day. Your poem ignites the imagination and brings the reader to a good place. The picture goes well with your poem. You did an excellent job.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your encouraging review.
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! The author's words were filled comfort and awe.
Happy Thanksgiving! Maria
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! The author's words were filled comfort and awe.
Happy Thanksgiving! Maria
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by ..Happy Thanksgiving to you too.
Comment from Tim Margetts
I adore the use of 'heaven's silken sigh.' to illustrate the wind in such a visual way.
Glorious indeed.
I thank you for sharing this great short poem
Tim
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
I adore the use of 'heaven's silken sigh.' to illustrate the wind in such a visual way.
Glorious indeed.
I thank you for sharing this great short poem
Tim
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for liking ny Haiku I wanted to give a sensory appeal .Glad i succeeded in it.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Sanku.
Your descriptive language in this Haiku paints a vivid picture in the mind of the reader. Through each line you continue your clear message from each line to the following.
Robert
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
Hi Sanku.
Your descriptive language in this Haiku paints a vivid picture in the mind of the reader. Through each line you continue your clear message from each line to the following.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much ..
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You're welcome.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Lovely personificationof the wind in this poem. I especially liked "heavens silken sigh". Thanks for sharing this Haiku.----------------------------
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
Lovely personificationof the wind in this poem. I especially liked "heavens silken sigh". Thanks for sharing this Haiku.----------------------------
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Rene Tyo
This is a really lovely poem. It reflects on a mood or feeling we likely all have had, and sums it up in a wonderful way. This is so evocative of a warm summer breeze. Well done, thank you for taking me back to great memories.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
This is a really lovely poem. It reflects on a mood or feeling we likely all have had, and sums it up in a wonderful way. This is so evocative of a warm summer breeze. Well done, thank you for taking me back to great memories.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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THANk you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If the wind is gentle, it can caress and touch our skin with a soothing hug as you say here, I enjoyed your inventive words to describe that gentle wind that takes to a heavenly place, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
If the wind is gentle, it can caress and touch our skin with a soothing hug as you say here, I enjoyed your inventive words to describe that gentle wind that takes to a heavenly place, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping b
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Such a soothing thought, emotion, and poem. Thank you for sharing this message with us. I am sure it's God who wraps us in a soothing hug. He's been there for me often.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
Such a soothing thought, emotion, and poem. Thank you for sharing this message with us. I am sure it's God who wraps us in a soothing hug. He's been there for me often.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
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thank you very much for stopping by.