Miracles
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Comment from Jacob1395
I really don't know how Eleanor's conversation with Jenna is going to pan out, she has already suffered so much I wonder just how much more she can take. I think Eleanor knows just how difficult it's going to be. Another excellent chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed it.
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I really don't know how Eleanor's conversation with Jenna is going to pan out, she has already suffered so much I wonder just how much more she can take. I think Eleanor knows just how difficult it's going to be. Another excellent chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
You are a master of details and description. I was spellbound when you described the helicopter landing with paramedics in tactical gear lifting Donatelli onto a stretcher. The stockroom scene and conversation was exceptional as you tied loose ends together. Now that Danni has Crystal who overheard everything, Garth and his team will have all sorts of leads to follow.
Really, this should be on Netflix.
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You are a master of details and description. I was spellbound when you described the helicopter landing with paramedics in tactical gear lifting Donatelli onto a stretcher. The stockroom scene and conversation was exceptional as you tied loose ends together. Now that Danni has Crystal who overheard everything, Garth and his team will have all sorts of leads to follow.
Really, this should be on Netflix.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We're one step closer to solving this and Matthew is safe. I can't wait for him to be healed. Good writing.
William gnawed on the inside of his cheek before answering. "He's a lock." (answering,)
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We're one step closer to solving this and Matthew is safe. I can't wait for him to be healed. Good writing.
William gnawed on the inside of his cheek before answering. "He's a lock." (answering,)
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Gradually drawing in on enough evidence to possibly make a stand and with Crystal as a witness of sorts. But if I know the writer, we're only getting started. :-) Thanks for sharing.
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Gradually drawing in on enough evidence to possibly make a stand and with Crystal as a witness of sorts. But if I know the writer, we're only getting started. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, Donatelli is on his way to a hospital and Danni has figured out most of what's going on with this crime ring. Then she rescued Crystal. Now that she has seen his watch, she can piece together the pieces of what's happened to Donatelli. Garth has kind of taken a back seat in all of this, letting his team and Danni collect the clues. Good chapter! Have a blessed weekend. Carol
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Wow, Donatelli is on his way to a hospital and Danni has figured out most of what's going on with this crime ring. Then she rescued Crystal. Now that she has seen his watch, she can piece together the pieces of what's happened to Donatelli. Garth has kind of taken a back seat in all of this, letting his team and Danni collect the clues. Good chapter! Have a blessed weekend. Carol
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
The guys in the bar are NOT working for Doyle? I thought they were. This is probably what happens when you miss a chapter here and there - and a whole book!
I am enjoying this, Carol, and rooting for the women!
xo
Pam
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The guys in the bar are NOT working for Doyle? I thought they were. This is probably what happens when you miss a chapter here and there - and a whole book!
I am enjoying this, Carol, and rooting for the women!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
Yay woot, the plot unfolds, but still with so many questions.
You go girl. If they can really secure Crystal plus gather evidence of the scam going down...
Personally I would be on the radio getting a swat team there to hit the place.
But I am not the author LOL
Great Chapter Carol x
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Yay woot, the plot unfolds, but still with so many questions.
You go girl. If they can really secure Crystal plus gather evidence of the scam going down...
Personally I would be on the radio getting a swat team there to hit the place.
But I am not the author LOL
Great Chapter Carol x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
The plot thickens I love it. I wonder what you got up your sleeve next as the tension builds. You my friend have been Blessed to be able to put pen to paper.
I'm so dumb. I was reading your book last night and I was confused how Donatelli was upright and healthy. Then it dawned on me it was a different book vs this one. I need to keep it together. ha,ha.
Wonderful job on this chapter.
Cecilia
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Carol,
The plot thickens I love it. I wonder what you got up your sleeve next as the tension builds. You my friend have been Blessed to be able to put pen to paper.
I'm so dumb. I was reading your book last night and I was confused how Donatelli was upright and healthy. Then it dawned on me it was a different book vs this one. I need to keep it together. ha,ha.
Wonderful job on this chapter.
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
She has said the words that prove Matthew wasn't the murderer of the other man in the boot. (trunk? I can't remember what you call it in America.)
Not only can she prove what happened, Matthew is safe, at last, in the safe hands of Frank, a criminal with a heart of gold. (when it comes to Eleanor)
Now she has to tell the others what's going on. And Garth can't moan at her, he never gave her a chance to tell him when she tried. This is speeding up nicely, Carol, fast but not too fast that it makes it rushed in the story sense. Well done, my friend. Love you lots, Sandra xxx
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She has said the words that prove Matthew wasn't the murderer of the other man in the boot. (trunk? I can't remember what you call it in America.)
Not only can she prove what happened, Matthew is safe, at last, in the safe hands of Frank, a criminal with a heart of gold. (when it comes to Eleanor)
Now she has to tell the others what's going on. And Garth can't moan at her, he never gave her a chance to tell him when she tried. This is speeding up nicely, Carol, fast but not too fast that it makes it rushed in the story sense. Well done, my friend. Love you lots, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent chapter, full of action. Let's hope they can keep Crystal safe and that she can give them the information she has ovrheard. Very well written. Dramatic and fast-paced.
Wendy
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Excellent chapter, full of action. Let's hope they can keep Crystal safe and that she can give them the information she has ovrheard. Very well written. Dramatic and fast-paced.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024