2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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12 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! love the connection of words here, pierce and through, yes, sometimes we just do things without much thought, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Ha! Ha! love the connection of words here, pierce and through, yes, sometimes we just do things without much thought, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 26-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
Just for your top artwork earns you a high grade! Yes, I have seen others with the same malady. It ain't pretty. But I am OK with small tattoos on someone else's body !
Maybe your mini rhyme scheme in lines two and three was intentional. Youth is a bigger stretch LOL
Mark
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Gypsy,
Just for your top artwork earns you a high grade! Yes, I have seen others with the same malady. It ain't pretty. But I am OK with small tattoos on someone else's body !
Maybe your mini rhyme scheme in lines two and three was intentional. Youth is a bigger stretch LOL
Mark
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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I have been near rhyming lately but it's not on purpose..if I try to rhyme it's awful. LoL
I have a small moon and a blue rose but they are on my back and never see them, it may be for the best. LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
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Ergo your non-de-plume, Gypsy Blue Rose! Now I know. Certainly better than Gypsy Blue Moon LOL
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL!!! Oh, Gypsy, that is hillarious! When I went to the gym a few years ago, there was an older lady there who had obviously lost a lot of weight. She was covered in tattoos and nobody could tell what they were, they were all screwed up in rolls of loose skin. She didn't have any piercings, thank goodness. But I see so many out there, young people who seem to forget that they will grow old. I absolutely loved this, if was soooo funny. That picture!!!!! That had me in stitches. Well I'm glad I read this one after reading your other one, this has set me up for the day. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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LOL!!! Oh, Gypsy, that is hillarious! When I went to the gym a few years ago, there was an older lady there who had obviously lost a lot of weight. She was covered in tattoos and nobody could tell what they were, they were all screwed up in rolls of loose skin. She didn't have any piercings, thank goodness. But I see so many out there, young people who seem to forget that they will grow old. I absolutely loved this, if was soooo funny. That picture!!!!! That had me in stitches. Well I'm glad I read this one after reading your other one, this has set me up for the day. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
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Hehe... yes, thank God I don't have any piercings. I do have a small moon and blue rose. They are on my back so I don't have to look at them... lol
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
I do feel sorry for those who have tattooed and pierced their body up and are now getting old. Those once loved tattooed now all warped and out of shape. I'm sure the piercings are uncomfortable as well.
Nice humorous poem Gypsy. I enjoyed it very much
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I do feel sorry for those who have tattooed and pierced their body up and are now getting old. Those once loved tattooed now all warped and out of shape. I'm sure the piercings are uncomfortable as well.
Nice humorous poem Gypsy. I enjoyed it very much
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I'm cracking up looking at that picture. People really don't realize that their skin changes and the tattoo will change also as their skin ages. Your poem gives us a good warning!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I'm cracking up looking at that picture. People really don't realize that their skin changes and the tattoo will change also as their skin ages. Your poem gives us a good warning!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Hahaha it's so silly. I'm happy it made you laugh.
Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
lol! fun and humourous with great imagery and smooth flow...
suggestion to maybe cut a couple words and make a senryu:
rebellious punk youth 5
was cool to pierce and tattoo--- 7
didn't think it through 5
eh just a thought lol ;-)
cool poem and funny pic
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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lol! fun and humourous with great imagery and smooth flow...
suggestion to maybe cut a couple words and make a senryu:
rebellious punk youth 5
was cool to pierce and tattoo--- 7
didn't think it through 5
eh just a thought lol ;-)
cool poem and funny pic
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy------so many things we do in youth when you can't omagine getting old, we end up regretting that choise when the inevitable happens. Like not wearing a bra when you're younger, they then become a tripping hazard after gravity has it's way, as it always done
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy------so many things we do in youth when you can't omagine getting old, we end up regretting that choise when the inevitable happens. Like not wearing a bra when you're younger, they then become a tripping hazard after gravity has it's way, as it always done
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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LoL how about men? Some things can droop too
Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Ha ha! I definitely see more rhyme coming into your verses. And I thoroughly enjoyed this. The visual is hilarious and your last line complements the humour well. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Ha ha! I definitely see more rhyme coming into your verses. And I thoroughly enjoyed this. The visual is hilarious and your last line complements the humour well. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Oh, the impulsiveness of youth. Some more than others get caught up in trends. Your illustration is very compelling and clearly depicts the idea. Nicely done.
RJ
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Oh, the impulsiveness of youth. Some more than others get caught up in trends. Your illustration is very compelling and clearly depicts the idea. Nicely done.
RJ
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this humorous poem. I have often wondered what happens to the tatts once a person ages and their skin gets wrinkled. Thank you for clearing that up. LOL This poem was fun and was the presentation.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I enjoyed reading this humorous poem. I have often wondered what happens to the tatts once a person ages and their skin gets wrinkled. Thank you for clearing that up. LOL This poem was fun and was the presentation.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I have a purple moon on my top back and a blue rose in my lower back. I can't see them so I can't tell lol maybe is for the better.
Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊