Emotional Dawn
When confidence lost is found . . .23 total reviews
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Yes. A happy song definitely will inspire hope and longing. I like the words you used here like "Effervescent" and "rhapsody." The satori is right on.
I think this is a winner.
Excellent.
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Yes. A happy song definitely will inspire hope and longing. I like the words you used here like "Effervescent" and "rhapsody." The satori is right on.
I think this is a winner.
Excellent.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2024
Comment from Rene Tyo
What a wonderful and I think, deliberate placement of words. To say so much, with so little. Very well done, this is a great poem in my opinion. The accompanying photo does the words justice. A rhapsody indeed!
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What a wonderful and I think, deliberate placement of words. To say so much, with so little. Very well done, this is a great poem in my opinion. The accompanying photo does the words justice. A rhapsody indeed!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. Making music out of the morning. How lovely. The picture you chose works very well for your poem's presentation. good luck in the contest.
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. Making music out of the morning. How lovely. The picture you chose works very well for your poem's presentation. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Yvette,
A lovely and hopeful 5-7-5 poem for the contest, my friend. Yes, I needed this as hope lifts me in the morning, and sustains me through the night.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
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Dear Yvette,
A lovely and hopeful 5-7-5 poem for the contest, my friend. Yes, I needed this as hope lifts me in the morning, and sustains me through the night.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Yvette.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line about hope.
-I also like the use of "genesis."
-A very good concluding line about
the "rhapsody" of dawn. It creates
a very good aha moment.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Very nice image and presentation, Yvette.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good opening line about hope.
-I also like the use of "genesis."
-A very good concluding line about
the "rhapsody" of dawn. It creates
a very good aha moment.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Yvette,
This is a inspiring poem of hope and and rebirth. I like the artwork.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
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Hi Yvette,
This is a inspiring poem of hope and and rebirth. I like the artwork.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Aussie
When youth recedes and age becomes our next stage of life, it is still an adventure. Blink and you will miss it.
I liked your poem, starting at Genesis and hearing the song of life with more wisdom and stability. K xx
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When youth recedes and age becomes our next stage of life, it is still an adventure. Blink and you will miss it.
I liked your poem, starting at Genesis and hearing the song of life with more wisdom and stability. K xx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
I have crossed that line in my life and found my true self again. You poems line: "genesis in morn's song " touched me and I feel that the Genesis has happened in my life.
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I have crossed that line in my life and found my true self again. You poems line: "genesis in morn's song " touched me and I feel that the Genesis has happened in my life.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Colorado Owl
This is an excellent reminder that we should begin each day with hope. The baggage of yesterday can ruin our frame of mind and thwart the best of plans. Thank you!
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This is an excellent reminder that we should begin each day with hope. The baggage of yesterday can ruin our frame of mind and thwart the best of plans. Thank you!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Some life experiences change our perspective on life Yvette and your words explain how we still remain hopeful that life will improve no matter the circumstances, I enjoyed the positivity in your post, love Dolly x
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Some life experiences change our perspective on life Yvette and your words explain how we still remain hopeful that life will improve no matter the circumstances, I enjoyed the positivity in your post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024