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Bees at Work

Watching honeybees going about their assigned work.

3 total reviews 
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This is a nice nonet with plenty of specific words to help create an image for the reader in the way of bees, sunlight, petals, and the movement of flight creating 'pure delight.' Congratulations on the 2nd place!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Thanks for the read and the congrats.
Comment from Mintybee
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This nonet follows the correct syllable count and paints a lovely picture. I'm a bit confused by the rhyme scheme. The rhymes come and go, which is very unusual - aaabcaade. Still, it was an enjoyable poem with a pretty visual and I liked it.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    Did not work at the rhyme scheme, words just seem to fall in place. So I let it be (no pun intended). Thanks for the read and review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Harry,

This is a sweet little poem about honeybees at work. This picture you chose for the poem is spot on. The nice thing about honeybees is they don't attack just because they can. If you leave them alone they pretty much mind their own business.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    Yes, for sure. Leave them alone. I enjoy watching their work. Thanks for the read and review. Appreciated.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 22-Nov-2024
    Harry,

    You're welcome.