Comment from
DonandVicki
I had guessed that this is a poem about suicide even before I read your authors notes. Well composed and I like the way you showed the original sketch of your poem as art.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
Comment from
Rick Gardner
A sad state of mind, a place many have experienced. Need to step back find a way home. Call a friend, call the help line. Look up, not down, look ahead, not backward. The future is there to behold, find it.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
Indeed, a sad state of mind. There is always a way out but you are blind to it in the moment.