2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 106 "Sleep My Baby".
9 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy......ah, the innocent days of youth, before we become bitter with rage and realise most people suck and your life turns into a parody!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy......ah, the innocent days of youth, before we become bitter with rage and realise most people suck and your life turns into a parody!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I absolutely love this poem. Really, I do. I have a feeling it would fit perfectly in the next book I'm about to start posting, once, Sami and Noah are married. LOL Could I use it as a lullaby that my heroin sings or reads to her newborn??? I would give you acknowledgement.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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I absolutely love this poem. Really, I do. I have a feeling it would fit perfectly in the next book I'm about to start posting, once, Sami and Noah are married. LOL Could I use it as a lullaby that my heroin sings or reads to her newborn??? I would give you acknowledgement.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you for the exceptional six stars review, Barbara
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a very sweet lullaby, and very opposite to the scary one, but I have a confession. I was a strange kid, (as if that's not obvious) and this sweet one would have scared me more than the other one. Even now, I associate sweet lullabies with something dark or sombre. This is well written and endearing.
RJ
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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This is a very sweet lullaby, and very opposite to the scary one, but I have a confession. I was a strange kid, (as if that's not obvious) and this sweet one would have scared me more than the other one. Even now, I associate sweet lullabies with something dark or sombre. This is well written and endearing.
RJ
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Nicki.B
What a beautiful poem/lullaby for night time rituals. Fabulous presentation it's warm and informative fluffy and sweet...I really would have used this to recite if my kids were still young, I always recited poems and sang lullabies for them, brought me back. Well done
Nicki xox
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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What a beautiful poem/lullaby for night time rituals. Fabulous presentation it's warm and informative fluffy and sweet...I really would have used this to recite if my kids were still young, I always recited poems and sang lullabies for them, brought me back. Well done
Nicki xox
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Nicki, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
A lovely read, it reminds me of my mother trying to get me to sleep when all I wanted to do was play, it must be so hard for a mother sometimes, though I do know everything was done in love, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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A lovely read, it reminds me of my mother trying to get me to sleep when all I wanted to do was play, it must be so hard for a mother sometimes, though I do know everything was done in love, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, Kym
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
A lullaby that shows us the gentle and even playful but peaceful scene of the night sky full of stars, dancing comets and playful moon. I guess despite all that, the baby went right to sleep!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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A lullaby that shows us the gentle and even playful but peaceful scene of the night sky full of stars, dancing comets and playful moon. I guess despite all that, the baby went right to sleep!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister
Love,
MariVal
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww this is so sweet and, indeed, much like a lullaby in its sentiments. I like the way you jolt the reader into another dimension in the second stanza which is pure delight. Thank you for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Aww this is so sweet and, indeed, much like a lullaby in its sentiments. I like the way you jolt the reader into another dimension in the second stanza which is pure delight. Thank you for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Hello, Debbie, this post comes in two parts, the sweet lullaby and the horror lullaby number two. They are complete opposites. I love horror.
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs ❤️
Comment from shelley kaye
aww that baby look very comfy sleeping on the clouds and cradled by the moon...
totally cute free verse lullaby for baby to go to sleep
the naughty moon line was unique!!
nice imagery and smooth flow - and rhyme!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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aww that baby look very comfy sleeping on the clouds and cradled by the moon...
totally cute free verse lullaby for baby to go to sleep
the naughty moon line was unique!!
nice imagery and smooth flow - and rhyme!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Hello, Shelley, this post comes in two parts, the sweet lullaby and the horror lullaby number two. They are complete opposites. I love horror.
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs ❤️
Comment from royowen
There's nothing like having birthed a child, flesh of one's flesh, heart of one's heart, a small miracle of love, a person that only you could have given birth to, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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There's nothing like having birthed a child, flesh of one's flesh, heart of one's heart, a small miracle of love, a person that only you could have given birth to, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy hugs ❤️
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Welcome