Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Miracles - Chap 15"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, I'm catching up, and will be reading the next chapters shortly. The story is really taking off and you leave us wondering what's what. I'm sure Eleanor will sought it out in the end. We'll see. Ulla:)))
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Hi Carol, I'm catching up, and will be reading the next chapters shortly. The story is really taking off and you leave us wondering what's what. I'm sure Eleanor will sought it out in the end. We'll see. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Jacob1395
It's going to be even more devastating for Jenna to hear that Matthew can't remember anything about his life. But I think she will be relieved to hear he's OK. Another well written piece, Carol, I enjoyed reading it.
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It's going to be even more devastating for Jenna to hear that Matthew can't remember anything about his life. But I think she will be relieved to hear he's OK. Another well written piece, Carol, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
More than acceptable, Carol it was full of drama as they tried to work out just what happened to Donatelli's car, and even more critical, Donatelli. Well done, especially during your visit with your family.
cheers,
valda
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More than acceptable, Carol it was full of drama as they tried to work out just what happened to Donatelli's car, and even more critical, Donatelli. Well done, especially during your visit with your family.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great chapter! Good dialogue between Miriam and Eleanor. It's good they are trusting each other now, and that Miriam will take Eleanor to see Matthew. Hopefully Garth will have a chance to set things right with Donatelli.
Enjoy your time with the great-grands. Blessings & hugs. Carol
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Great chapter! Good dialogue between Miriam and Eleanor. It's good they are trusting each other now, and that Miriam will take Eleanor to see Matthew. Hopefully Garth will have a chance to set things right with Donatelli.
Enjoy your time with the great-grands. Blessings & hugs. Carol
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm sure you'll have no trouble keeping up with the three young girls and writing too. Keeping up with the girls is hard I'm sure, but writing words just seems to flow like bubbles from a Bubble Machine for you. I'm sure you're saying ha ha, as you work so hard. Have a wonderful trip!
Thanks for sharing.
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I'm sure you'll have no trouble keeping up with the three young girls and writing too. Keeping up with the girls is hard I'm sure, but writing words just seems to flow like bubbles from a Bubble Machine for you. I'm sure you're saying ha ha, as you work so hard. Have a wonderful trip!
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hi Carol, I'm so sorry I late, I've been having eye problems, I couldn't see properly. I've had Graham helping me. I'm being booked in for an operation, laser, and it should all be done before Christmas.
But all my sixes are gone and you know I always love your chapters and always think they are worthy of a six. I don't even know where they went.
Graham has helped me read this chapter, and of course it's fabulous. I'm so glad Garth is there, and Miriam has told Eleanor that Matthew wants to see her. I'm lucky that I'm an old fashioned touch typist, so Graham just has to run his eye over this. Well done, and now we are going to read the next one! Virual six, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Hi Carol, I'm so sorry I late, I've been having eye problems, I couldn't see properly. I've had Graham helping me. I'm being booked in for an operation, laser, and it should all be done before Christmas.
But all my sixes are gone and you know I always love your chapters and always think they are worthy of a six. I don't even know where they went.
Graham has helped me read this chapter, and of course it's fabulous. I'm so glad Garth is there, and Miriam has told Eleanor that Matthew wants to see her. I'm lucky that I'm an old fashioned touch typist, so Graham just has to run his eye over this. Well done, and now we are going to read the next one! Virual six, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Never worry about the sixes, my sweet friend. And a big thank you to Graham for reading and I hope enjoying. Are you going to have cataract surgery or something else? Take care of yourself and don't worry about me.
Love you as always,
Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I'm glad Miriam is going to let Eleanor see him. Maybe she can help him remember. I'm sure Garth isn' going to want to be left behind. There is always someone in law enforcement who is crooked and working with the other side.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I'm glad Miriam is going to let Eleanor see him. Maybe she can help him remember. I'm sure Garth isn' going to want to be left behind. There is always someone in law enforcement who is crooked and working with the other side.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Unfortunately, you are right; Doyle has the money and power to sway many of them. I hope Garth figures it out.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
This chapter is great and stop apologising for having a family and commitments.
This is good and normal :p
I love the way this is developing.
Good job Carol
Tim x
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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This chapter is great and stop apologising for having a family and commitments.
This is good and normal :p
I love the way this is developing.
Good job Carol
Tim x
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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At home, my family forgets I exist and all l do is sit at my computer all day. It's wonderful, exhausting, and exhilarating to be around family that cares. Glad you enjoyed this chapter...I have to cram my typing into a short amount of time. Nana duties, you know.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Ah Donatelli doesn't know how fortunate he is, fortunate that Miriam found him, I wonder why she is still earthbound, but she's certainly a good hearted soul, if nothing else, at least Jenna knows that Donatelli is probably alive somewhere, beautifully written Caro. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Ah Donatelli doesn't know how fortunate he is, fortunate that Miriam found him, I wonder why she is still earthbound, but she's certainly a good hearted soul, if nothing else, at least Jenna knows that Donatelli is probably alive somewhere, beautifully written Caro. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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Yes, he was lucky that she found him and kept him safe... Now it will be Eleanor's efforts to get him to a safer place before they come looking for him. And Miriam stayed because she felt honor bounded to her family home until her granddaughter would inherit it. Now she will be at peace.
Smiles, Carol
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Thank you Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
The chapter is fine, Carol - no worries as you enjoy your "girls".
I'm looking forward to Eleanor and Miriam speaking with Matthew; just hoping Garth and the others don't blow it.
Carol, will this book be done by the end of November? Lots needed to happen beforehand.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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The chapter is fine, Carol - no worries as you enjoy your "girls".
I'm looking forward to Eleanor and Miriam speaking with Matthew; just hoping Garth and the others don't blow it.
Carol, will this book be done by the end of November? Lots needed to happen beforehand.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
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I've got my fingers crossed. I didn't know I would need to come to North Carolina when I started the contest or I might have chosen a far easier book. Thanks for enjoying and for encouragement too!
Smiles, Carol