Freedom is Found in Change
My philO5 total reviews
Comment from Alicia johnston
Wow I'm blown away you have a way with using words I wish I could.. usually when I write I'm so fucked in the head angry or sad it turns out good but it's a lot of fill words to help it flow like just always , really, all of the , never have to, .... If that makes sense!? Anyways the way you write I love and I love your twist on words that are simple yet understood.. if you have any pointers that would actually help me im all ears
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Wow I'm blown away you have a way with using words I wish I could.. usually when I write I'm so fucked in the head angry or sad it turns out good but it's a lot of fill words to help it flow like just always , really, all of the , never have to, .... If that makes sense!? Anyways the way you write I love and I love your twist on words that are simple yet understood.. if you have any pointers that would actually help me im all ears
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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I have read your stuff recently and definitely connect with it. It seems like a stream of consciousness that not only rhymes well but tells a detailed story too. You turn feelings into pictures using your words, that is really creative and to top it off it flows well too. You clearly have a knack for these things, a gift. I've been honing my words for a few years now. There are tons of ways I try and go about making my writing better but the most important, for me, is to live my life in a way that inspires the words to jump out of me. I try to get out of my comfort zone as often as I can cus I feel like experiencing something that shakes me up is a great way to stir up some new words. ALSO, reading books totally refines my words naturally. It seriously morphs with how I write in a positive way like every time. Lastly, this is kind of off topic, but if you wanted to potentially cash out from writing a good poem, Poetry.com has a monthly contest where you can win $. I'm not a spokesman I'm just a guy who's actually won money from there. Anyway, thank you for the 6! That means a lot
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think I understand your philosophy of being adaptable to life events and able to live for the present. Your free verse is a pleasing read and is complemented well with a delightful visual depicting childhood happiness. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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I think I understand your philosophy of being adaptable to life events and able to live for the present. Your free verse is a pleasing read and is complemented well with a delightful visual depicting childhood happiness. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024
Comment from zanya
It's an interesting angle on the philosophy of life writing prompt and there is much herein to chew on, so to speak- the final two lines are especially inspiring.
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It's an interesting angle on the philosophy of life writing prompt and there is much herein to chew on, so to speak- the final two lines are especially inspiring.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well-versed, though I think "philosophy does not have ups and downs."
Philosophy of men, perhaps, by Godly philosophy was written by a never changing God though with free will we, as mortals, tests His resolve to have us return from whence we originated - unsoiled.
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Well-versed, though I think "philosophy does not have ups and downs."
Philosophy of men, perhaps, by Godly philosophy was written by a never changing God though with free will we, as mortals, tests His resolve to have us return from whence we originated - unsoiled.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2024
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear poet, my very best wishes for the contest with
your philosophical poem. It's
breezy and flows well. Sometimes we need to think
like a child with wonderment.
Have a mellow evening.
Blessings
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Dear poet, my very best wishes for the contest with
your philosophical poem. It's
breezy and flows well. Sometimes we need to think
like a child with wonderment.
Have a mellow evening.
Blessings
Comment Written 19-Nov-2024